Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he loved this unique fairy-tale with a twist at the end! A very clever well written piece, much enjoyed, I liked your rhyming, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thank you Dolly. It is a little known fact that this is how Singer sewing machines got there name. I'm glad I can be a part of educating people and making it fun. =} Thanks much. Rox

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is very good. It's well written and I like it a lot. I'm getting ready to lay down beside my sleeping beauty wife so she can yell at me for waking her up.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thank you Thomas. It is a little known fact that this is how Singer sewing machines got there name. I'm glad I can be a part of educating people and making it fun. =} Thanks much. Rox

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

Roxanna, that's so cute - but I'm not surprised; most of your writing is. I love that you turned the "Sleeping Beauty" fairy tale on its head - and in rhyme, no less - and the Singer Sewing Machine Twist was inspired!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thank you so much, Michele. It is a little known fact that this is how Singer sewing machines got there name. I'm glad I can be a part of educating people and making it fun. =} Thanks much. Rox

reply by Michele Harber on 13-Oct-2018

Who'da thunk it? Thank you for saving me from having to look it up on Wikipedia! ;-)

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

You're welcome. =}

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Very cute, I like the way that you manipulated the old tale and gave it a fresh face lift. The picture that you chose to enhance the Faerie Tale was a perfect choice. Don and Vicki.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thank you very much. It is a little known fact that this is how Singer sewing machines got there name. I'm glad I can be a part of educating people and making it fun. =} Thanks much. Rox

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

it is really a very clever poem. new endings to old Fairy Tales sounds like a fun project, very original. this one rhymes nicely in couplets. nice one, Roxanna..............meeshu

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thank you Meeshu. It is a little known fact that this is how Singer sewing machines got there name. I'm glad I can be a part of educating people and making it fun. =} Thanks much. Rox

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Hi Roxanna,
Writing is, of course, free expression and sometimes needs to be a 'just for fun thing.'
I enjoyed your fun version of Sleeping Beauty and was instantly drawn to the magnificent image choice.
You did so well to 'spin' (sorry for the pun)such a fine tale.
Blessings
Shirley


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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thank so much Shirley =)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well Roxanna I knew there was a perfectly good explanation in how the Singer sewing machine got its name and now you have made that reason know. Figures it was a door to door salesman.

This is a really fun rewrite of a golden oldie and also has a Halloween feel to it.

Thanks for sharing. :)

Gloria

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thank you Gloria. It is a little known fact that this is how Singer sewing machines got there name. I'm glad I can be a part of educating people and making it fun. =} Thanks much. Rox