Chameleon
A tongue the length of its body3 total reviews
Comment from Ogden
Excellent work, Persevere, You've penned an informative, entertaining, and unconventional haiku. (I didn't know a chameleon's eyes function independently of each other, which is implied in your poem.)
Don
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Excellent work, Persevere, You've penned an informative, entertaining, and unconventional haiku. (I didn't know a chameleon's eyes function independently of each other, which is implied in your poem.)
Don
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Don, for such an encouraging review. Yes, chameleon?s eyes do function independently of each other.
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You are very welcome. Good luck in the haiku contest.
Don
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wonderful haiku - incorporates action and description with just that little bit of anticipation with your parting line...Great job! :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Wonderful haiku - incorporates action and description with just that little bit of anticipation with your parting line...Great job! :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Your wonderful review and good luck wishes are much appreciated. Thank you so much.
Comment from Sugarray77
Great photo that captures the reader's eye and then attention. Even though this Haiku is short, as they all are, you have written a poem that is vivid and energetic. It should do well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Great photo that captures the reader's eye and then attention. Even though this Haiku is short, as they all are, you have written a poem that is vivid and energetic. It should do well. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Your comments are so encouraging.Thank you. Chameleons are fascinating creatures.
