The Truth Will Come to Light
the Sun responds ...4 total reviews
Comment from tbacha58
Of course coming from you Michael the well known writer here, i can only write Bravo it is a beautiful picture and so well does go with your amazing description. Loved it. Terry
I just don't know why you never nowadays make a 5 minute time to read my poem like before. We use to have a wonderful time together sharing our write.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
Of course coming from you Michael the well known writer here, i can only write Bravo it is a beautiful picture and so well does go with your amazing description. Loved it. Terry
I just don't know why you never nowadays make a 5 minute time to read my poem like before. We use to have a wonderful time together sharing our write.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hi, Mum
So nice to see you here, reviewing and posting. YAY! I'm not around much. But I write once in a while and read in the wee hours. I always pop in to check up on my friends. Thanks so much. Love, mike
Comment from RFL
The poem is lovely and so creative as is. Yet, Michael, you have made it even more special by its being a sequel. Well-done and congrats on winning this contest.
Best, RFL
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
The poem is lovely and so creative as is. Yet, Michael, you have made it even more special by its being a sequel. Well-done and congrats on winning this contest.
Best, RFL
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Aww,, thanks sooo much, RFL. I love a contest that gets us to write something that NEVER would've occurred to us. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the result. It was fun to write and also to read all the great entries. Imaginations were all in full gear. I did kind of like mine too. LOL I lucked out and got an extra vote avoiding an 18 way tie!. :)) mike
Comment from Tina Crute
What a clever response to the first poem! I love both of the pictures that you used because they both show light being cast. I think it's clever that the moon and the sun are both in the sequel picture. All in all, this is beautiful and intelligent.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
What a clever response to the first poem! I love both of the pictures that you used because they both show light being cast. I think it's clever that the moon and the sun are both in the sequel picture. All in all, this is beautiful and intelligent.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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What lovely things to hear, Tina. I'm so pleased. Thanks a million. :))
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Beautiful sequel to beauty of a first poem. I love the aspect of the sun and moon as competitors. One or both need an attitude adjustment! Lol. Love the pictures you selected. Excellent. Hugh
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
Beautiful sequel to beauty of a first poem. I love the aspect of the sun and moon as competitors. One or both need an attitude adjustment! Lol. Love the pictures you selected. Excellent. Hugh
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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HA! Yes, you're so right, Hugh. Jeesh, what more do they want than rule over the day and night, right? LOL
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the hilarious review and kind words. :))