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Comment from Tina Crute
I applaud you for doing your own thing and having fun with it! To me, this seems like you are daydreaming in a way, and these are all the thoughts that are running through your head. I love that you're wanting to move where you can be free , even if you are not sure where that is, you're ready to go! We all need to be dreamers like
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I applaud you for doing your own thing and having fun with it! To me, this seems like you are daydreaming in a way, and these are all the thoughts that are running through your head. I love that you're wanting to move where you can be free , even if you are not sure where that is, you're ready to go! We all need to be dreamers like
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from meeshu
I love this one and you are right it is deliciously silly. but I half to say the title is priceless, a tremendous hook. so very funny, Alcreator................meeshu
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I love this one and you are right it is deliciously silly. but I half to say the title is priceless, a tremendous hook. so very funny, Alcreator................meeshu
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Rickie1
ALCREATOR
Where is this place? What's it's address? I think you succeeded in defining utopia? Ah, but it seems a place of imagination and fantasy. Too bad. Maybe some day.
Rickie
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ALCREATOR
Where is this place? What's it's address? I think you succeeded in defining utopia? Ah, but it seems a place of imagination and fantasy. Too bad. Maybe some day.
Rickie
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Ben Colder
Reminded me of something I read about the grass looks greener on the other side. LOL. I think we move about every 7 years I am told. Good silly poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Reminded me of something I read about the grass looks greener on the other side. LOL. I think we move about every 7 years I am told. Good silly poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Well we all need a little humour sometimes, AC and this is good. A Utopia existing free of humans inhumanity to humans.
The specifics are a terrific inclusion because many people are marginalized by examinations and disabilities when none of them should be.
Great job and an enjoyable read.
Gloria
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Well we all need a little humour sometimes, AC and this is good. A Utopia existing free of humans inhumanity to humans.
The specifics are a terrific inclusion because many people are marginalized by examinations and disabilities when none of them should be.
Great job and an enjoyable read.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I can say you silly poem of this unlikely place exist makes me I wish we already had this Utopia.
Alcreator, I could understand what you are saying in this part about rings-
Come along
Come rolling
Come ringing
Move along my rings?
Gert
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hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I can say you silly poem of this unlikely place exist makes me I wish we already had this Utopia.
Alcreator, I could understand what you are saying in this part about rings-
Come along
Come rolling
Come ringing
Move along my rings?
Gert
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
I'm encouraged by the fact you called it a "silly poem" because it made little sense to me in a few areas, though I got others. The most confusing was the "move along my rings" bit.
Has a feel of Orwellian "Big Brother" in places, encouraging all to embrace the new land (world) known simply as "there". Vague.
Ooreenstemming registreer vyf vir geen rede nie. (Afrikaans - I figure a little confusion here in this review is merited).
Bill (WildWithWords)
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I'm encouraged by the fact you called it a "silly poem" because it made little sense to me in a few areas, though I got others. The most confusing was the "move along my rings" bit.
Has a feel of Orwellian "Big Brother" in places, encouraging all to embrace the new land (world) known simply as "there". Vague.
Ooreenstemming registreer vyf vir geen rede nie. (Afrikaans - I figure a little confusion here in this review is merited).
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
There is so much I actually liked about this "utopic sounding society." It sounds like people would be free from scams, and I like the idea of the religion being called, "Humanity." That's one powerful word and place. An interesting poem!
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There is so much I actually liked about this "utopic sounding society." It sounds like people would be free from scams, and I like the idea of the religion being called, "Humanity." That's one powerful word and place. An interesting poem!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from LaFrance
A perfect place does deserve an excellent six-star rating. Why not it takes the reader to a wonderful place of no grief or worries, a utopia. Thanks for sharing.
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A perfect place does deserve an excellent six-star rating. Why not it takes the reader to a wonderful place of no grief or worries, a utopia. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Aussie
A perfect place to live. If we could turn back the hands of time, just after the war, economy was booming. People loved each other, crime was almost non-existent. Folks danced and had respect for one another. Today, exactly the opposite. Fear, violence and no respect. Still, we must go through the dark times before we can see His glorious Light. XXK.
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A perfect place to live. If we could turn back the hands of time, just after the war, economy was booming. People loved each other, crime was almost non-existent. Folks danced and had respect for one another. Today, exactly the opposite. Fear, violence and no respect. Still, we must go through the dark times before we can see His glorious Light. XXK.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
