Who Do You See?
Do you see the real me?15 total reviews
Comment from Insider98
At first, we always put up a mask, so that we don't show who we really are. After that, it's up to us when we'll take it off. Some people will beat us to it and figure out who we are...sometimes we like that. Excellent piece! Love the flow and rhymes.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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At first, we always put up a mask, so that we don't show who we really are. After that, it's up to us when we'll take it off. Some people will beat us to it and figure out who we are...sometimes we like that. Excellent piece! Love the flow and rhymes.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Very true, but I can never leave my mask in place very long. All the junk stuck to me gives me away. =} Thanks so much for the great review.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Very well written poem of transparency. We often present these sides of ourselves we want others to see. Looking within takes off the veil, then we can make progress. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Very well written poem of transparency. We often present these sides of ourselves we want others to see. Looking within takes off the veil, then we can make progress. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much Donka.
Comment from Teri7
I enjoyed reading this poem about you for the club entry "I'm Watching You". You used very good descriptive words and the art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed reading this poem about you for the club entry "I'm Watching You". You used very good descriptive words and the art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much Teri. Rox
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous poem and an interesting interpretation of the peeking eyes behind the black mask. There are many people that watch our every move, even when we are not aware of anyone looking at us.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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A very well-written humorous poem and an interesting interpretation of the peeking eyes behind the black mask. There are many people that watch our every move, even when we are not aware of anyone looking at us.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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yes, it seems some one is always watching and these days they have it on video. ={ Thanks so much Sandra.
Comment from Sally Law
This is precious and sweet! It's refreshingly honest to boot! I see only the finished results of your fine writing, not how you got there. It nice to see that you are a real person. That's what shows through to me! All the best.
Your pal, Sal
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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This is precious and sweet! It's refreshingly honest to boot! I see only the finished results of your fine writing, not how you got there. It nice to see that you are a real person. That's what shows through to me! All the best.
Your pal, Sal
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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I am way too real I'm afraid, though extremely talented and a genius. =} No one else will say it so I have to. =} This was fun to write, I wanted people to think I was getting deep into myself but I just can't be serious. =} Thanks so much Pal, Rox
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No, not way too serious! Some of the stuff I?ve reviewed recently here on FanStory has been down right depressing! If you ever get there, I will let you know! Your pal, Sal :+)
