Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

Love how this blows love your internal Rhymes clever use of wording and I like the shape of it also tantalizing it means up to a climax which looks like it may end in Climax, if you'll pardon the play on words love this style of writing.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Darren

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Hi Darren, thanks for your compliments. I?m glad you enjoyed reading it.

(I) Love how this blows (and) love your internal (r)Rhymes. Clever use of wording (,) and I like the shape of it also. (T) tantalizing it means up to a climax (This) which looks like it may end in Climax, if you'll pardon the play on words(.) (I )love this style of writing.
I hope this helps,
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, this is the second poem I have read where this image has evoked some lust! I enjoyed your erotic road to desire and fulfilment here Trisha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018

Yes, I think more saw coldness, I saw the heat in the flames ha ha! Thanks for your review
Hugs, TRISHA

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very good. I do like your theme. Mine is similar. Well chosen words to express the mood in your free verse poem with a bit of rhyme. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks, Marilyn. We did have similar themes about passion, but yours is more poetic in wording.. I guess thats the difference in levels reviewing. (I.e. recognized or not). I am trying to become more imaginative, and your poem is more fluid.Thanks for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by BeasPeas on 29-Oct-2018

Ending line of yours is super.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

tantalizing is right, mesmerizing and hypnotizing. excellent piece, Trisha. the language does describe the picture perfectly...............meeshu

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

THANK YOU! I consider your reviews on my penning to be an honor. Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sandra Piddock

Excellent

Oh, this is powerful. I love the imagery all through this, and in the last few lines it's 'get 'em off' time, and the whole mood changes. Eyes convey a host of messages, and you have conveyed that well in this. Great stuff.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thank you ?Great stuff? means a lot in review words. I appreciate the compliment, and your positive response.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a unique layout on your poem--so clever! What a great take on the theme, "I'm Watching You" for your pix this challenge. I enjoyed your "romantic/lusty" poem. "Blue iris messengers" was a great description.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks so much, Cindy The layout often creates itself, with a little word length change. I really appreciate your reciew
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

It's interesting you have interpreted lust in these eyes on fire. I didn't see that.
They certainly contain the blue. I could say they are fiercely determined or full of devils desire. Presentation is well done. Worded well too.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

It?s in everything!!! Thanks very much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Elizabeth Joanne

Excellent

I like this poem. It speaks words beyond its words. The eyes...the all-seeing windows of the soul. They are beautiful, yet full of information and feelings. Beautiful. The artwork is spectacular with this work as well.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks very much Elizabeth.
Hugs, Trisha