Winter's Melody
Ode to winter3 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
What a lovely ode to winter this is. The image you've chosen is perfection. Syllabic count is spot on and I found no errors. Just rich, eloquent language pulling a simple 5-7-5 piece to fruition in this poetic masterpiece. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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What a lovely ode to winter this is. The image you've chosen is perfection. Syllabic count is spot on and I found no errors. Just rich, eloquent language pulling a simple 5-7-5 piece to fruition in this poetic masterpiece. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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What an encouraging and superb reveiw zanya
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem of winter
with solid imagery of the winds and woodlands
Good use of alliteration with all the "w" sounds
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem of winter
with solid imagery of the winds and woodlands
Good use of alliteration with all the "w" sounds
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Excellent review zanya
Comment from WildWithWords
Now THIS is good - restricted or not this is a good contender.
Your word choice is superb and you even found room for a small piece of alliteration along the way. Best of luck in the contest. I give you a great shot at it.
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Now THIS is good - restricted or not this is a good contender.
Your word choice is superb and you even found room for a small piece of alliteration along the way. Best of luck in the contest. I give you a great shot at it.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
