Wintertime
a 5-7-5 poem about winter15 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
It's not winter here yet. Well penned and I'm looking forward to the coziness. But I'm not looking forward to the 10 little kids I teach not being able to go outside to blow off steam
Well penned short and to the point poem
God bless
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
It's not winter here yet. Well penned and I'm looking forward to the coziness. But I'm not looking forward to the 10 little kids I teach not being able to go outside to blow off steam
Well penned short and to the point poem
God bless
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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I can see your point as to the ten little ones. It's not winter here yet either, though they are forecasting more snow than last year, which is okay because I think we got a total of about 2" the whole winter. Really do appreciate the stars.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Ode to Winter in the 5-7-5 format you have penned for the prompt. You used very lovely imagery from the art work and very beautiful picture of winter with your words. I loved reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
This is a very beautiful and well written Ode to Winter in the 5-7-5 format you have penned for the prompt. You used very lovely imagery from the art work and very beautiful picture of winter with your words. I loved reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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Thank you Teri7. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Anntonette
The sun in the sky, burning as fire, but the snow still falls blanketing earth. Love this Ode to winter, the image goes well with the piece as well. Thanks for sharing your views on winter!
- Anntonette
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
The sun in the sky, burning as fire, but the snow still falls blanketing earth. Love this Ode to winter, the image goes well with the piece as well. Thanks for sharing your views on winter!
- Anntonette
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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Thank you Anntonette for reading it, reviewing it and the lovely stars.
Comment from meeshu
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done, Anno. a perfect match with the picture.
I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done, Anno. a perfect match with the picture.
I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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Thank you so very much, meeshu. I appreciate the wonderful stars and the review.
Comment from Dawnya
I don't have the best eyesight; you might want to change the font or background to create a larger contrast for other readers with similar problems.
This is a lovely view of a cozy winter night with the earth snuggled under a blanket of snow.
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
I don't have the best eyesight; you might want to change the font or background to create a larger contrast for other readers with similar problems.
This is a lovely view of a cozy winter night with the earth snuggled under a blanket of snow.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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I thank you for the stars and review and you're right, I could use a better contrast.