Comment from nordicgirl

Excellent

This is amazing for a short piece. I can't believe you received a three for this. I can't stop laughing. This has my vote. Amazing. It's difficult to make sense let alone find depth with these. NG

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

I know. He thinks it's the worst thing he ever read. LOL Oh well, he probably thinks I need a haircut too. Thanks so much. :))

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

A chilling but very cool (har har, get it?) epitaph and ode. Excellent use of words, artwork, font, and arrangement for an impressive visual impact. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

HAAAAA!!!! Yep.I get it. :)) Thanks so much for the great review and especially the smile. :)) mike

reply by kathleenspalding on 12-Oct-2018

Likewise!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A sad but entertaining entry for the contest...Great touch of Poe for wintry evening that will last through eternity! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

Glad you liked it. Yeah, I thought it looked a bit like Poe too after I finished. I wasn't even going for that. He must be in my brain!!!!

Thanks a million. mike

reply by Y. M. Roger on 11-Oct-2018

Oh, no! Poe in your brain!! Well, if you get the sudden urge to go to "The Horse You Rode In On Saloon"... just ignore it and go on with your life!! :) :) Yvette

Comment from Raul1

Average

It's okay, but you can write it better. I like your poem. It's simple and easy to read. Write it with more feeling to it. Make it meaningful. Nice poem, by the way. Good work.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018

Nope. I can't write it better. I would like to see your suggestions for improvement though. :))