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FAMILY TIES.

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"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from Anntonette
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Another wonderful family writing piece! I bet you have a large family :) Love the image here, the older silhouette is lifting the baby silhouette and this goes well with the first line of your writing piece! - Anntonette

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
    HELLO ANNTONETTE: YES, Mom gave birth to nine siblings. Six sisters and three brothers. Raised with eight siblings...I've learned to be a family-minded brother. Counting Dad and Mom...I have 10 good reasons to be family-minded. Cordially: Rhonnie69.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem nicely shows your love for your dad and your mom. It also shows how your dad gives you strength and shows you how to live the right way,

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018