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Comment from dmt1967
The picture and poem is very well versed and I enjoyed reading it. The words made me ponder and I enjoyed the message behind the poem a lot. Thank you for sharing.
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The picture and poem is very well versed and I enjoyed reading it. The words made me ponder and I enjoyed the message behind the poem a lot. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
I was going to ask you the meaning of J, but then I saw the notes.
Lovely poem.
Just one thing: when you say:
Raise me up just know
Don't you mean now?
Thanks for sharing.
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I was going to ask you the meaning of J, but then I saw the notes.
Lovely poem.
Just one thing: when you say:
Raise me up just know
Don't you mean now?
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Well written poem with a Christian message. I didn't understand the "J morn" or "J dawn". Complimentary artwork. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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Well written poem with a Christian message. I didn't understand the "J morn" or "J dawn". Complimentary artwork. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
How joyful will that day be when He shall "gentlemen, its closing time" and all the world will know the splendor of our Creator. I love how you creatively express such positive views! Your writing blesses the heart! xo
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How joyful will that day be when He shall "gentlemen, its closing time" and all the world will know the splendor of our Creator. I love how you creatively express such positive views! Your writing blesses the heart! xo
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from estory
I think the poem really speaks about the joy of being with God, with being in his presence. the imagery is upbeat, light and bright, and the tone is very joyful. It also has a nice musical element to it, I think you did a good job with it and kept it obtuse enough for many different people to be able to enjoy. estory
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I think the poem really speaks about the joy of being with God, with being in his presence. the imagery is upbeat, light and bright, and the tone is very joyful. It also has a nice musical element to it, I think you did a good job with it and kept it obtuse enough for many different people to be able to enjoy. estory
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, another inspiring offering from an apparently deeply spiritual Christian writer, who continually fulfills his Christian obligation, by witnessing to the FanStory community with his messages...
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In my opinion, another inspiring offering from an apparently deeply spiritual Christian writer, who continually fulfills his Christian obligation, by witnessing to the FanStory community with his messages...
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I am probably wrong but, the "J" speaks two things to me Jubilant and Jerusalem. I have a simple mind, don't ya know LOL. It is a delightful verse filled with hope and joyous anticipation. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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I am probably wrong but, the "J" speaks two things to me Jubilant and Jerusalem. I have a simple mind, don't ya know LOL. It is a delightful verse filled with hope and joyous anticipation. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from lyenochka
I sense a feeling of excitement about the encounter with God in this poem. I wondered what is meant about "J Morn" and "J Dawn."
Since God never sleeps, we can meet with Him at any time. Thank you for sharing this poem of joy waiting for His coming.
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I sense a feeling of excitement about the encounter with God in this poem. I wondered what is meant about "J Morn" and "J Dawn."
Since God never sleeps, we can meet with Him at any time. Thank you for sharing this poem of joy waiting for His coming.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from misscookie
Wow this deep
I like the artwork you chose to go with your poem
it is a prefect match , you captured-my attention from the first line to the last your words were so strong and certain of the time He will return
this is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
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Wow this deep
I like the artwork you chose to go with your poem
it is a prefect match , you captured-my attention from the first line to the last your words were so strong and certain of the time He will return
this is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from Bichon
An interesting poem that clearly depicts your thoughts and faith in a pleasing way to read. You have put yourself into the poem and it worked great. Good job!
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An interesting poem that clearly depicts your thoughts and faith in a pleasing way to read. You have put yourself into the poem and it worked great. Good job!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
