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Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this 13 line poem. Just for your information, I was confused at first... until I turned my phone sideways. It is a lot more lines on a mobile...
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Thank you for sharing this 13 line poem. Just for your information, I was confused at first... until I turned my phone sideways. It is a lot more lines on a mobile...
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
Comment from closetpoetjester
Uplifting and inspirational and a testament to your faith in your God. I liked that you painted this poetic portrait with a broad brush. God is all inclusive yes? No matter what faith. Thoughtful and shows much insight.
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Uplifting and inspirational and a testament to your faith in your God. I liked that you painted this poetic portrait with a broad brush. God is all inclusive yes? No matter what faith. Thoughtful and shows much insight.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is well-expressed. I like its message and formatting. Your words are well-chosen and descriptive. I understood the words as I read, but thanks for the notes, too. Your poem has a strong message. The image is fitting.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your poem is well-expressed. I like its message and formatting. Your words are well-chosen and descriptive. I understood the words as I read, but thanks for the notes, too. Your poem has a strong message. The image is fitting.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
Wow!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!!!! Awesome job!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!!! Keep writing,!!!!
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Dear author,
Wow!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!!!! Awesome job!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!!! Keep writing,!!!!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
Hello I hope all is well! I think that you wrote another great and amazing poem that spreads God's word. It is very well written and as always uplifting. Thank you for sharing!
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Hello I hope all is well! I think that you wrote another great and amazing poem that spreads God's word. It is very well written and as always uplifting. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem expressed in your own passion and truth. It should touch the hearts of many with what's going on in the world today. Many of us are praying and waiting on our Saviour to come. Best wishes!
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I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem expressed in your own passion and truth. It should touch the hearts of many with what's going on in the world today. Many of us are praying and waiting on our Saviour to come. Best wishes!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from DeboraDyess
I wonder what we'd live like if we actually knew when God was coming back. An interesting concept.
The Bible talks about the 10 Virgins (do you know that parable?) 5 fell asleep and missed out, 5 were ready. Interesting that you put the 4 hours of sleep at the end.
Be blessed,
Deb
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I wonder what we'd live like if we actually knew when God was coming back. An interesting concept.
The Bible talks about the 10 Virgins (do you know that parable?) 5 fell asleep and missed out, 5 were ready. Interesting that you put the 4 hours of sleep at the end.
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from amada
You have very powerful lines, the one I like the best is "Call and shake me up..." Your lines are powerful and very direct, they address the reader, that is a good thing. A very good message for these days of turmoil.
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You have very powerful lines, the one I like the best is "Call and shake me up..." Your lines are powerful and very direct, they address the reader, that is a good thing. A very good message for these days of turmoil.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello ALCREATOR,
I pray you are doing well. This is a lovely, caring and inspirational poem. Yes, our God will return one day to take His people to eternity. I don't think the believers have anything to worry about if we are sleep. You met the 13 line requirement. The imagery is so fitting for your message. Nice rhyming of your end words. Your message is clear of the coming of the Savior one day. Thanks for the author's notes. Well done. Happy future writing:-)
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Hello ALCREATOR,
I pray you are doing well. This is a lovely, caring and inspirational poem. Yes, our God will return one day to take His people to eternity. I don't think the believers have anything to worry about if we are sleep. You met the 13 line requirement. The imagery is so fitting for your message. Nice rhyming of your end words. Your message is clear of the coming of the Savior one day. Thanks for the author's notes. Well done. Happy future writing:-)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
Comment from SixFtLion (Suzanna)
Thank you for your lovely poem and you expressing what God means to you. Also, I enjoyed the "education" in your author notes about all the words you are using. English is not my native language and I appreciate every opportunity to learn.
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Thank you for your lovely poem and you expressing what God means to you. Also, I enjoyed the "education" in your author notes about all the words you are using. English is not my native language and I appreciate every opportunity to learn.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
