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God, Omnipresent is here, there, everywhere!

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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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The images that you portray are Divine and your words lend certainty to the way it will happen. We need to have faith in our conceptions throughout our life and hang on to whatever we believe.

Simply, softly, He'll speak in our languages; call and shake me up.

This makes me wonder 'Where will He appear?'

Ralf

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021

Comment from Possummagic
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Beautifully written and lovingly crafted as a testament to Gods love which is with us at all times. We need to remind ourselves of that at some stage. He will come. M x

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021

Comment from Anne Johnston
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Although I don't understand your poem completely, you have put a lot of thought into it. Acrostics are interesting. I believe Jesus is coming back in the near future to take His people home. As for now, He is alive in my heart.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
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Very unique, very intriguing. I like the structure of your poem.
I also liked that you used the time, 3:33, as there seems to be significance in the numbers 333. In fact our son has it tattooed on his neck for spiritual reasons.

Excellent

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

Comment from Callann Briggid Waterz
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I believe that you are speaking of the way god has made you feel deep inside and that is breathtakingly blissful to my own thoughts on the creator. You have such a way with how to put the exact wording together. Wonderful job

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

Comment from Modus Mos
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This poem is trying to be more than one thing, It's archaic and old, that tries to modernize with modern methods. It reads more like a sonet. To some people, it may seem a little bit different, but this is a poem.

It challenges methods and tries to be something different.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

Comment from Wendy G
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The joy of anticipation of the Second Coming in power and glory of Jesus is palpable, and the desire to be ready to be called and raised up to meet Him is very exciting. Well written.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

Comment from LJbutterfly
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Thank you for a timely reminder that the true and living Omnipotent God is coming for His people (those who believe). For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. (1Th 4:16)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Living God's Coming Today!
by Alcreator Litt Dear

I like your belief. I don't follow religion but I believe there's a loving God....I just don't know what he or she is.

Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

Comment from padumachitta
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hello a well written poem that reflects the authors point of view and stay within that them throughout. I see it as a call to those who have faith or beleive in some kind of overseeing god.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021