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God, Omnipresent is here, there, everywhere!

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Comment from LIJ Red
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Religions are like the blind men who mistook the elephant for a wall, a tree, a rope, and a sail, each one shows just a part of him...excellent poem about That Great Getting-Up Morning, Fare Thee Well...

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Okay Alcreator Litt Dear
and smiles I will be happy to wake up in the wee hours of night and of course anytime of the day to wait for --
to receive our Omnipresent Livin' God.
Gert

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018

Comment from WildWithWords
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You certainly have a fairly unique style as you say. Not completely punctuation free (5 apostrophes) but pretty close. I understand the one used in "Desto" but why the shortened version of "all" ?

A wonderfully intricate looking piece of art you have chosen to go along with your written piece. Nice work.

Bill (WildWithWords)

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

Comment from hari anand
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Living God's Coming Today! Its a thirteen lines poem and 13, I consider as an auspicious number according to my religion, and I loved your poem as a beautiful Prayer.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

Comment from robyn corum
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Every living or other being -- Nice that you explained this, because I don't think that EVERY man or woman will be excited to see the coming of our Lord and Savior, unfortunately. It's a sad fact that not all of us are following the will of God as He outlined in His Word.

A nice poem. Thank you!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Hello there, my friend, this is a positive and uplifting poem you've penned.
Nice rhyme throughout. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

Comment from Adri7enne
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Interesting way of seeing the world. God is always with us, in every breath, in every blade of grass, even in the sigh that accompanies our breaking hearts. There is no religion in that. There is only the sure faith that God is, and is everywhere. I feel your joy in life. Well done, A.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

Comment from Kay Seed
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The main theme I felt throughout this poem is anticipation. The author has a strong voice. I still don't understand the "J" parts, but it contributes to the creativity and reader's interpretation which is something new for me. It reminds me of the verse in the Bible that talks about how the earth groans with birthing pains while anticipating the 2nd coming of Jesus, I think it's in Revelation. I enjoyed reading this poem.

-Kay

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

Comment from Ben Colder
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The poem and photo reminded the days when I preached God's word under the big tents. God is and never will be religious. He is spirit and to be worshiped in spirit and truth. Well done poet.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018

Comment from Irish Rain
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You've written this with obvious passion, about a subject dear to your heart. Most creative and original, and you've even included the 'key' to interpretations. Beautiful picture too.
Blessings...

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018