God is Here!
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Comment from Susanjohn
Our God is coming...we should all be prepared. You have an interesting way of expressing yourself. I can appreciate that. Well done! Wishing you a wonderful day! :-)
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Our God is coming...we should all be prepared. You have an interesting way of expressing yourself. I can appreciate that. Well done! Wishing you a wonderful day! :-)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
Comment from amahra
I haven't read you in a while. I'm not notified when you post so glad I caught this one. God is coming and we don't know when. The poem was well crafted with great lines.
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I haven't read you in a while. I'm not notified when you post so glad I caught this one. God is coming and we don't know when. The poem was well crafted with great lines.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I could see the acrostic poem in this post. I enjoyed reading. I agree God will return in His own time. We should remain ready. Thank you for sharing this with us. I had missed reading your poems. I am glad I caught this one.
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I could see the acrostic poem in this post. I enjoyed reading. I agree God will return in His own time. We should remain ready. Thank you for sharing this with us. I had missed reading your poems. I am glad I caught this one.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi Alcreator,,
This Acrostic-like poem is heralding Christ's Second Coming. In beautiful language you write with excitement the approaching time He will descend to earth to gather people into His fold. Thank you for these joyful words that you have created about a most anticipated miraculous event in all of history!
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Alcreator,,
This Acrostic-like poem is heralding Christ's Second Coming. In beautiful language you write with excitement the approaching time He will descend to earth to gather people into His fold. Thank you for these joyful words that you have created about a most anticipated miraculous event in all of history!
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
Comment from Ritasher
An interesting use of the language, not the most common structure, interesting picture. However, I don't really get the main idea. As I am not a believer, I try to evaluate spiritual work carefully - if I see a point expressed originally, if I see something that is appealing enough to make me interested in religion - then I evaluate it very well, accordingly. Here it doesn't really sound too appealing to me - I just read many adjectives talking about God's glory, but nothing that would make me remember this poem or move me. I think you could do better as I see you are able to write in quite difficult sentence structures. Good luck!
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An interesting use of the language, not the most common structure, interesting picture. However, I don't really get the main idea. As I am not a believer, I try to evaluate spiritual work carefully - if I see a point expressed originally, if I see something that is appealing enough to make me interested in religion - then I evaluate it very well, accordingly. Here it doesn't really sound too appealing to me - I just read many adjectives talking about God's glory, but nothing that would make me remember this poem or move me. I think you could do better as I see you are able to write in quite difficult sentence structures. Good luck!
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Thank u.
Comment from pome lover
This poem truly exemplifies your joy and excitement at God's coming - "Wake me up" - many people need waking up. As "God is with is", we can speak to Him any time. some people kind of have a running commentary with Him during each day.
An exuberant post. Congratulations on All Time Best.
Katharine - pome lover
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This poem truly exemplifies your joy and excitement at God's coming - "Wake me up" - many people need waking up. As "God is with is", we can speak to Him any time. some people kind of have a running commentary with Him during each day.
An exuberant post. Congratulations on All Time Best.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
Comment from poetwatch
God is coming, Al. Yet, He has been here a long time. He is everything that is around us and even us. I like your destiny time 3.33 a.m. The time I awake most nights, give or take a few minutes. Still, only He knows when the time will be, for we are His children and He loves us all. Thank you for sharing.
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God is coming, Al. Yet, He has been here a long time. He is everything that is around us and even us. I like your destiny time 3.33 a.m. The time I awake most nights, give or take a few minutes. Still, only He knows when the time will be, for we are His children and He loves us all. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
Comment from Gina Schneller
This is awesome! I love it because it is different. I also love the message it carries. Very inspirational. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us. Best of luck on your writing journey!
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This is awesome! I love it because it is different. I also love the message it carries. Very inspirational. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us. Best of luck on your writing journey!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
Comment from Graybærd
I have written in the past how hearing or reading something can take you to a place in your past. Your poem took me to October 7, 1995. Awake before the sun and waiting. This was the day I was heading in to Central Park in NYC for the Papal Mass. I am not sure if this was the intention of your poetry but there it is. Thank you.
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I have written in the past how hearing or reading something can take you to a place in your past. Your poem took me to October 7, 1995. Awake before the sun and waiting. This was the day I was heading in to Central Park in NYC for the Papal Mass. I am not sure if this was the intention of your poetry but there it is. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
Comment from AnnaLinda
Wow, Alcreator!
I had no need of your notes...although I did read them after I read your poem and totally agree with your thoughts expressed in them.
A Very Powerful Acrostic you have penned here...Spiritual in every aspect
and a surprise and delight to happen upon. All of your lines hold truth...
I highlighted these:
"Nothing is unknown to Him about state of ours mortal earthly living.
Get up early, dare I sleep tonight; His Light's started glowing."
No...I don't sleep well. Yes, on 3:33...often 4:44...sometimes 5:55.
Super special write and I very much enjoyed!
Anna
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Wow, Alcreator!
I had no need of your notes...although I did read them after I read your poem and totally agree with your thoughts expressed in them.
A Very Powerful Acrostic you have penned here...Spiritual in every aspect
and a surprise and delight to happen upon. All of your lines hold truth...
I highlighted these:
"Nothing is unknown to Him about state of ours mortal earthly living.
Get up early, dare I sleep tonight; His Light's started glowing."
No...I don't sleep well. Yes, on 3:33...often 4:44...sometimes 5:55.
Super special write and I very much enjoyed!
Anna
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
