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FAMILY TIES.

Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "Me Times Three."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello rhonnie69
I can see why you used a verse from EPHESIANS 6 : 4. Yes, it has a great message
that as fathers, we not only must ensure our children do certain things, we must also help them accomplish our expectations in ways that do not disrespect them and damage their hearts, thus provoking them to anger.
With Help from God
Gert

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This is a work, a reminder of the hymn from the Bible, about Fathers warning to sons who are blessed and why and what for fathers to do with the children for their blessed living; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

Comment from Lastamen
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The admonishment from the pages of inspiration are always and forever a solace for the soul and the guideline for all true men who would be true fathers. Good counsel. Till the last amen.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

Comment from meeshu
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This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done, rhonnie69. great advice and I would add, stay with your family. I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

Comment from tfawcus
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I guess from the title of this one that you have a couple of sons and that you, together with them, are the three kings that you refer to. The bond between fathers and their sons is an important one.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

Comment from kiwijenny
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Thanks for the admonition. It is timely and good. But there was no poem attached . The Bible stands on its own I know but we can't review God's word can we?
Ok I see ...well in that case I have to change my review stars. God gets a six.
God bless

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
    HELLO JENNY: Thank you for using your valuable time to view my work. Your comments are always complements. Thank you for the stars. Thank you for being my friend. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by kiwijenny on 08-Oct-2018
    You are welcome