Love, Loss and Healing
A Trinet Poem6 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Your topic of love, loss, and healing resonate with me. I loved that you didn't shy away from the honest ups and downs of the stages/phases that grief takes us through. A beautifully written trinet poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Your topic of love, loss, and healing resonate with me. I loved that you didn't shy away from the honest ups and downs of the stages/phases that grief takes us through. A beautifully written trinet poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
I love this. The three stages of grief, anger, doubt, regret, and disappearing of depression by accepting the new reality are clearly set apart. It is a process that ends up in healing. The separation of stanzas indicate that process. The few words tell a powerful story of transformation.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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I love this. The three stages of grief, anger, doubt, regret, and disappearing of depression by accepting the new reality are clearly set apart. It is a process that ends up in healing. The separation of stanzas indicate that process. The few words tell a powerful story of transformation.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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So glad you understood where I was coming from in this trinet. Thanks for sharing your insights.
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a good job developing this poem for the Trinet prompt. Your use of deep emotions and the progression from depression to healing is very good and completes a cycle of healing. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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You did a good job developing this poem for the Trinet prompt. Your use of deep emotions and the progression from depression to healing is very good and completes a cycle of healing. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful poem and beautiful photography. Is that Mount Fuji?
I love the lines
Healing heart
Breathe again
I love the poetry forms we learn about. Trinet is new to me
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Beautiful poem and beautiful photography. Is that Mount Fuji?
I love the lines
Healing heart
Breathe again
I love the poetry forms we learn about. Trinet is new to me
God bless
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights. And yes, that is Mount Fuji where the cherry blossoms inspire the festival of Sakura - rebirth.
Comment from donette1914
very well written with love and loss and being able to live again
thank you for sharing it was an honor to read your work
very creative and I like the way that you write
I hope the very best in the contest
I love the artwork
donette1914 on Oct 6 2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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very well written with love and loss and being able to live again
thank you for sharing it was an honor to read your work
very creative and I like the way that you write
I hope the very best in the contest
I love the artwork
donette1914 on Oct 6 2018
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you taking the time to read and share your insights. It's important not to let life bog us down and to remain positive.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful use of the trinet in a detail of the healing process -- your word choices just flow so beautifully with the form that it gently takes the reader through the loss and the grief and, finally, to the relief. :) Great job! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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A wonderful use of the trinet in a detail of the healing process -- your word choices just flow so beautifully with the form that it gently takes the reader through the loss and the grief and, finally, to the relief. :) Great job! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you taking the time to read and share your insights. It's important not to let life bog us down and to remain positive.
