FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "The Sky Is Falling!""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from KatyM
That is so sweet! Love the artwork. As always I have no adds or subtractions. When I wake up in the mornings part of my routine is to check out the new reads on FanStory. I sure wish all parents realized how important they are to their children and act accordingly. However, it doesn't always work out that way.
Happy Writing,
Katy
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That is so sweet! Love the artwork. As always I have no adds or subtractions. When I wake up in the mornings part of my routine is to check out the new reads on FanStory. I sure wish all parents realized how important they are to their children and act accordingly. However, it doesn't always work out that way.
Happy Writing,
Katy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a lovely thought. It is so reassuring for readers who have wondered how to define parenting, this is is. We can gain example from Jesus as he speaks of how he is our shepherd. If parents could follow this example, then children would grow up within this learned behavior and they too will become shepherds for their children. This will begin a wonderful cycle. Well written.
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This is a lovely thought. It is so reassuring for readers who have wondered how to define parenting, this is is. We can gain example from Jesus as he speaks of how he is our shepherd. If parents could follow this example, then children would grow up within this learned behavior and they too will become shepherds for their children. This will begin a wonderful cycle. Well written.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from tfawcus
I like the sense of family and feeling of safety that is engendered, whether one is talking of a nuclear family here on earth or God's wider family. I see a sense of both in your poem. Perhaps the title might be repeated as the first line of the poem, to provide greater continuity.
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I like the sense of family and feeling of safety that is engendered, whether one is talking of a nuclear family here on earth or God's wider family. I see a sense of both in your poem. Perhaps the title might be repeated as the first line of the poem, to provide greater continuity.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Lady Jane
"Fear not(,) precious flock."
What a special and heartfelt beseeching, dear rhonnie. I love the image and the sentiment. Yes, parents can be shepherds when alive, but also in death. They become our angels...eternally mindful of our needs and trials. Their wings give us strength beyond the veil and under the veil. Your words are so delicate and timely. The entire presentation was wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
Janelle
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"Fear not(,) precious flock."
What a special and heartfelt beseeching, dear rhonnie. I love the image and the sentiment. Yes, parents can be shepherds when alive, but also in death. They become our angels...eternally mindful of our needs and trials. Their wings give us strength beyond the veil and under the veil. Your words are so delicate and timely. The entire presentation was wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
Janelle
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from Anntonette
Hey again, Rhonnie! I see that you created another beautiful poem. Let this poem RISE and the sky FALL. I love the image you chose for this one. - Anntonette
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Hey again, Rhonnie! I see that you created another beautiful poem. Let this poem RISE and the sky FALL. I love the image you chose for this one. - Anntonette
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from meeshu
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done, rhonnie69. let it fall! I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
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This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done, rhonnie69. let it fall! I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
