Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This personification of light 5-7-5, Sunny Morning, has the correct formatting and finds sunlight teasing the poet to wake and welcome a new day. Nice.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks for the insightful review Bill. Yeah she likes to play. Cheers, j

Comment from hari anand

Excellent

How naughty the light here is. Absolutely loved your entry with perfect syllable counts and lively picture.I like the sunflower representing light here from sun. Thank you for entering the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks for the insightful review. Yes that is the feeling I wanted to convey. Naughty and playful she is. Cheers, j

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very cute and adorable
very believable and heartfelt
well chosen words you used
very nice photo
I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 5th 2018

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j