Comment from Rickie1

Excellent

Bill

Cute. While I'm not always of a fan of some the pictures used, or should I say overused, this one fits perfectly and is more bearable. Well done.

Rickie

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018

Thanks, Rickie

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

OMG gotta love that picture-he's so cute and could not be left out of this newest series. Clever puning at the end to make for an all together merry little read.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018

Thanks, FB

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

This is an obvious optical illusion, there is no way a huge lard assed bear this size could ride a bike that small. It is a very amusing picture for sure. It made me laugh out loud for real. Too bad it's not real, I think that anyone seeing it would never forget it.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018

The transportation has three wheels, thereby transferring the weight all around,

reply by nomi338 on 05-Oct-2018

good point, like the one at the top of my head.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Thanks for the chuckles. The picture and the poem is perfect even your puns of "bearable" and "roll/role." (although I don't think that trike can bear anymore.)

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! ;) Once again, you've taken your entertaining, word-play bears to a competition... hope they enjoyed the ride! :) :) Thanx for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks, Yvette

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Isn't this cute! The picture and the words go together to make a delightful reading experience. I don't see bears where I live now. I miss that. But none of them rode a tricycle. lol

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and well written four line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words that went so well with the art work you chose. Bearable! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is clever and well composed with symmetry and adorable image. Bears are impressive in their own right, but best stay away from them in the wild. Great entry for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks, Matilyn

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

The picture makes this a lot more "bearable." Four lines aren't a lot to work with, about the only choice you have is free verse. Especially when you're working with a theme that you're running out of options with. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks, Earl

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

That may be the cutest picture I've seen in a long while. Love the poem as well. Just saw a huge black bear this morning, feasting on the contents of someone's garbage can. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks, BN. Hope the bear enjoyed the ?canned? food.