Starving
Rictameter form76 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
Your poem has a great message that we all need to heed. I like the picture you chose of the bear, It made me feel sorry for the poor critter.I guess under those parameters, for one to expect it to be a total rhyming poem is unreasonable.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Your poem has a great message that we all need to heed. I like the picture you chose of the bear, It made me feel sorry for the poor critter.I guess under those parameters, for one to expect it to be a total rhyming poem is unreasonable.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Hi Earl, thank you so much for a wonderful review...my heart goes out to the wildlife...so many are dying because of us...sad...thank you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO L.RAVEN: I like your poem here. It brings to my mind the lack of people's concern for our wildlife. Our God gave them to us for our benefit...not to miss treat. People like you should keep writing things that you have written here. Keep writing, L.Raven. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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HELLO L.RAVEN: I like your poem here. It brings to my mind the lack of people's concern for our wildlife. Our God gave them to us for our benefit...not to miss treat. People like you should keep writing things that you have written here. Keep writing, L.Raven. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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HI Ronnie, thank you my friend for a wonderful review...and you are so right...God didn't put them here to be mistreated...thank you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from jdrhye
It is sad and true. I am conflicted when the news tells of a person that was attacked by an animal. More and more wildlife is put in a compromising position. Their instinct for survival is based on their ability to find food. Not to mention there are Eco systems gravely affected by the near or extinction of whole species.
Your poem is nicely situated, well written and articulated.
J
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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It is sad and true. I am conflicted when the news tells of a person that was attacked by an animal. More and more wildlife is put in a compromising position. Their instinct for survival is based on their ability to find food. Not to mention there are Eco systems gravely affected by the near or extinction of whole species.
Your poem is nicely situated, well written and articulated.
J
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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HI sweet girl, my heart goes out to all the wildlife...they are all in trouble because of humans..land and water....thank you for a wonderful poem...and you are so right...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rictameter. The wild animals seem to be confused about where there habitat is, they often come to human neighborhoods to seek food because their natural habitat is destroyed and they are starving of hunger.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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A very well-written Rictameter. The wild animals seem to be confused about where there habitat is, they often come to human neighborhoods to seek food because their natural habitat is destroyed and they are starving of hunger.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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HI Sandra, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...it is so sad...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent work in this format. The theme is sad and serious. When humans practice a human first philosophy, this is one of the results. We need to learn to coexist with ourselves and other species. Very poignant with powerful message. Hugh
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Excellent work in this format. The theme is sad and serious. When humans practice a human first philosophy, this is one of the results. We need to learn to coexist with ourselves and other species. Very poignant with powerful message. Hugh
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Hi Hugh, you are so right...we need to learn to live together...and respect the wildlife...they are Gods creations as well...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for picking up on the idea we were discussing in a recent review, and reminding all of us that the roving animals are innocent and just hungry. Your choice of the Rictameter form with its rhymes and repeats is just right to emphasize the situation. Cheers and sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you for picking up on the idea we were discussing in a recent review, and reminding all of us that the roving animals are innocent and just hungry. Your choice of the Rictameter form with its rhymes and repeats is just right to emphasize the situation. Cheers and sighs- Joan
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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HI Joan, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...I feel so bad about all our wildlife...it is dying off so fast...and no one is looking...sigh...thank you...love you...Linda xxoo
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There are a few heroes out in today's world who care about wildlife as much as you do. Let's hope they are successful in their efforts to protect the creatures. Hugs- Joan
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I agree Joan...let's hope and pray someone will step forward and save our wildlife...sigh my sweet friend...big hugs back to you...love you...xxoo
Comment from Teri7
Linda, This is a very well written Rictameter you have penned about the wild animals that are treated unfairly. some are killed and others just abused. they are hungry I do believe also. God put them on the earth for a reason. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Linda, This is a very well written Rictameter you have penned about the wild animals that are treated unfairly. some are killed and others just abused. they are hungry I do believe also. God put them on the earth for a reason. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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HI Teri, you are so right my sweet friend...God put them here for a reason...and we are killing them...it is so sad...thank you sweet girl...love you so much...Linda xxoo
Comment from kiwijenny
In one town I lived in I counted 11 pharmacies..ELEVEN each took up space ..some within yards of each other. What in the world...we sick people are getting sicker. And ruining the planet to boot...Boots is a pharmacy in England ...lol
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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In one town I lived in I counted 11 pharmacies..ELEVEN each took up space ..some within yards of each other. What in the world...we sick people are getting sicker. And ruining the planet to boot...Boots is a pharmacy in England ...lol
God bless
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Hi Jenny, LOL...it's crazy my sweet friend...we just keep building...spreading cement everywhere...and the wildlife have no where to go...it is so sad...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...love you Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
I may be losing it...I was actually angry when the locals made a big fuss over the bowhunter who killed a 515 lb. black bear near here. The woods are being developed here, too, engendering every form of dishonest BS....excellent rictameter
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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I may be losing it...I was actually angry when the locals made a big fuss over the bowhunter who killed a 515 lb. black bear near here. The woods are being developed here, too, engendering every form of dishonest BS....excellent rictameter
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Hi LlJ, we can't keep taking their land...leaving them nothing to eat...and killing them...and calling it right...It's not right...these are living things...and they get hungry...thank you for a great review...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Ogden
I agree with all your poem expresses, Linda, though it's unclear to me who the starving, city-dwelling homeless narrator could be. (It certainly isn't the unfortunate bear in the illustration.)
These problems need solutions - and soon!
:)
Don
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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I agree with all your poem expresses, Linda, though it's unclear to me who the starving, city-dwelling homeless narrator could be. (It certainly isn't the unfortunate bear in the illustration.)
These problems need solutions - and soon!
:)
Don
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Hi Don, yes they do...and yes the bear in the picture is starving...and many more of them...people better wake up...God put all wildlife here for a reason...thank you for a great review my friend...smiling back at you...love Linda xxoo
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You're welcome, Linda, but what do you think He had in mind when He decided on Trump?
