Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-Syllable count is good.
-The imagery is effective
and shows conditions on the plains.
-I like the concluding line with
"lonesome weeds."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018

Thank you for the stars and the comments. Both of these much appreciated.

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Oct-2018

You are very welcome.

Comment from Kelly Grim

Exceptional

I love this subject! and "lonesome weeds" indeed! "wander" is the perfect verb here! Love the "w" sounds in that line and with "wind" in the line before! "carried along" is terrific too! I can see this tumbleweed -- brilliantly, perfectly, clearly! This is a truly lovely entry into this contest!!!! I wish you all the best and will be checking out the voting booth later! The pic is perfect and the presentation is simple, fitting! I'm moved to give this 6 stars and I can't quite place my finger on why-- just the overall feeling, I think!!!!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018

Read the message first. I am honored that you would give it such a high rating. Thank you for reading it.