Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a lovely and invigorating read to jumpstart the weekend!! :) :) Your imagery and emotional phrasings are just perfect to convey the feel of the beach at all of its different incarnations throughout the day! :) :) Thank you so very much for sharing that sunshine and joy with all of us today! :) :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Yvette, you?re very kind! Thank you for your supportive and complimentary review. I?m glad you got enjoyment while reading my experiences.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Illumination

Exceptional

I feel calm and relaxed after reading that. I can feel the sand in my toes and the sun on my neck. Your writing style is right up my street. I love it. Nothing to add here but I've certainly taken something away. Thank you and well done.
Stay Gold
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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

It seems wonderful to know the imagery in my prose met its goal. Thank you so much for your complimentary review and valued six stars
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Good

I wouldn't call this poetry. It's prose in the wrong category. Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think so. If it were a contest entry it would be rejected. Tell me if you disagree.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

I agree with you 100%. I?m going to backtrack and see if I used the incorrect template. Thanks very much........
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

A wonderful descriptive poem about the seaside, your words read so smoothly and your imagery was superb, you were even kind enough to describe myself.....white bread in a sea of toast......it was like looking in a mirror....excellent
Mitchell

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Mitchell, haha I?m a Limey, so I am also a piece of white toast ! That?s not such a liberty to say that. Thank you very much for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

The beach offers peace an tranquility and is so soothing to one's soul.It is nice to be able to sit and reflect on one's life and hopes and dreams down by the waterside.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Yes, the natural elements can be calming. It?s a good place for putting things into perspective. Thanks for your /kind review. I know how busy you are
Hugs, Trisha

reply by country ranch writer on 12-Oct-2018

Smiles

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

☺️🙂

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about the visual imagery from memories of living of a girl and how she feels about Nature and surroundings affect her life; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Thanks, Alcreator! Your positive review was gratefully received.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You took me to another place here Trisha and I enjoyed the journey, a well written piece and I especially liked:

'Some of the Germans boasted firm bodies, others wore size 5 swimwear trying to support size 18 figures. There would also be the English who looked like white bread in a sea of toast."

Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

We like the same thoughts! I can be ?cheeky? because I?m English white bread as well! Thank you for your supportive review.
Hugs, Trisha