Eternally Yours
Villanelle love poem27 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Hi Susan, fantastic villanelle. I do believe it is the perfect form for a love poem.
You two rhyme choices are two soft sounds which further illustrate the sensuality of the poem.
One word choice that I'm not sure of
where truthfulness bares (bears?) no disguise.
Anyway this is a fine, fine poem and tremendous read. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Hi Susan, fantastic villanelle. I do believe it is the perfect form for a love poem.
You two rhyme choices are two soft sounds which further illustrate the sensuality of the poem.
One word choice that I'm not sure of
where truthfulness bares (bears?) no disguise.
Anyway this is a fine, fine poem and tremendous read. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Gloria you sweetie! Thank you for reading and the awesome review!! You always make me smile. AND...you are correct BEARS, I made the correction. I am always messing that up! lol
Comment from meeshu
this is such a beautiful poem. the perfect subject for a Villanelle. a romantic classic style of poetry fashioned nicely here. a sweet sentiment, SusanJohn...............meeshu
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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this is such a beautiful poem. the perfect subject for a Villanelle. a romantic classic style of poetry fashioned nicely here. a sweet sentiment, SusanJohn...............meeshu
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Aw Thank you for stopping by and leaving me such a lovely review! I do appreciate you.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Very moving and beautiful! When two spirits unite their unity and love is upheld by the Creator. And freedom is the birth right of every child of God.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Very moving and beautiful! When two spirits unite their unity and love is upheld by the Creator. And freedom is the birth right of every child of God.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Beautiful review Donka! thank you so much!! :-)
Comment from WalkerMan
It is a delight to see you back to your sweet love poems, and this splendid Villanelle would stir any man receiving it, regardless of the occasion. It is a joyous celebration of togetherness that banishes all past anguish, and offers positive dreams for a happy future. Superb.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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It is a delight to see you back to your sweet love poems, and this splendid Villanelle would stir any man receiving it, regardless of the occasion. It is a joyous celebration of togetherness that banishes all past anguish, and offers positive dreams for a happy future. Superb.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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I tried to write something else...but a love poem came out! Thanks Mike :-)
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You are most welcome, Susan. Your loving heart knows what you do best.... -- Mike
Comment from Anne B Francis
As as free spirit you have entered this also into your writing 'love'
brings happiness, sorrow, loss and hurt and the pain is too much to bare
but here love is everything one would wish it to be and happiness floats everywhere. Love is its truest form
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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As as free spirit you have entered this also into your writing 'love'
brings happiness, sorrow, loss and hurt and the pain is too much to bare
but here love is everything one would wish it to be and happiness floats everywhere. Love is its truest form
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Anne! Wow you got it so completely! Thank you for stopping by and leaving me such an awesome review!! I do appreciate you.
Comment from DR DIP
Wow that is so beautiful Susan you are the Queen of romance I'm loving the repeat theme lines it really works a treat i reckon this could be sung with the right tune and melody. Thanks for sharing my sweet
xxdip
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Wow that is so beautiful Susan you are the Queen of romance I'm loving the repeat theme lines it really works a treat i reckon this could be sung with the right tune and melody. Thanks for sharing my sweet
xxdip
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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I just see your name and smile!!! Hi Dip!.. thanks for reading, you always make my day!!!!! hugs you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Vilanelle and an excellent romantic love poem about the love that will last forevermore. Even when we have some difficulty in a relationship at times, true love will never dies.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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A very well-written Vilanelle and an excellent romantic love poem about the love that will last forevermore. Even when we have some difficulty in a relationship at times, true love will never dies.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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I just love this form! Thank you Sandra for your lovely review!
