Eternally Yours
Villanelle love poem27 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
I did not see this. I so loved the presentation. Beauty and love is always a first, which includes heart.
Wasn't an easy structure to flow, and repeating lines can hinder, but silken lines holds this tight.
Deserves success.
Bravo.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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I did not see this. I so loved the presentation. Beauty and love is always a first, which includes heart.
Wasn't an easy structure to flow, and repeating lines can hinder, but silken lines holds this tight.
Deserves success.
Bravo.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 07-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Awe thank you for the sweet review! Made my day!..It's cold here in Wisonsin and I'm fighting a head cold...so I'm happy to see you stopped by for a visit! :-)
Comment from chrissy8
A fabulous example of a villanelle. I wish I had an extra star to give! I like the repetition of "caress my heart forevermore". I like repetition when used well in poetry. Very detailed romantic piece. I loved every moment of reading it! Job well done!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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A fabulous example of a villanelle. I wish I had an extra star to give! I like the repetition of "caress my heart forevermore". I like repetition when used well in poetry. Very detailed romantic piece. I loved every moment of reading it! Job well done!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thank you Chrissy for such a lovely review!!!
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This is quite lovely. The art? Is the painting of you? It looks like you. I appreciate the author notes. There is always something there to learn. Well done. Good Luck and Great Job!Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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This is quite lovely. The art? Is the painting of you? It looks like you. I appreciate the author notes. There is always something there to learn. Well done. Good Luck and Great Job!Wendy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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HI! Thank you for the great review! LOL artwork is not me...but since you pointed that out..well it does kinda look like me! :-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This villanelle, Eternally Yours, is set up correctly and tells a love story beneath the sycamore that marks some eternal consummation that marks a time and a timelessness.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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This villanelle, Eternally Yours, is set up correctly and tells a love story beneath the sycamore that marks some eternal consummation that marks a time and a timelessness.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Aw Thanks Bill :-)
Comment from LaFrance
This was a well-crafted poem and very pleasing to read. It followed well with the villanelle style of poem. The eternal love theme went well with the title.
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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This was a well-crafted poem and very pleasing to read. It followed well with the villanelle style of poem. The eternal love theme went well with the title.
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Hello, thanks for reading and the review. Was there something you noticed that needed correction? Totally open to suggestions.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Eternally Yours", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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"Eternally Yours", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Such a sweet review!!! thank you so very much :-)
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susanjohn, you certainly deserved the sweet review.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from tfawcus
Two well chosen repeating lines are the making of this villanelle. It is a delightful expression of love and, as a poem, it flows beautifully with consistent rhythm and well chosen rhymes.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Two well chosen repeating lines are the making of this villanelle. It is a delightful expression of love and, as a poem, it flows beautifully with consistent rhythm and well chosen rhymes.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thanks Tony, I always appreciate you.
Comment from Mastery
Great Job on this Villanelle, Susan. You have a remarkable way with poetry. The words in this piece display just how well you do the writing, like:
"Soothe blushing warmth, I do implore...
for you alone guide mountain highs;
caress my heart forevermore."
Bravo! Good job, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Great Job on this Villanelle, Susan. You have a remarkable way with poetry. The words in this piece display just how well you do the writing, like:
"Soothe blushing warmth, I do implore...
for you alone guide mountain highs;
caress my heart forevermore."
Bravo! Good job, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Hi Bob!! I got your book! :-))) Thanks for the review and the kind words. I do appreciate you.
Comment from Ogden
Although I don't remember you, Susan, (forgive me, as my memory, understandably, is not as keen as was in those bygone times to which you refer) your beautiful words of joyous love have returned me to the enchanted days and nights we may have shared. Now let's get on with it.
(Love that poem!)
Fondly,
Don
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Although I don't remember you, Susan, (forgive me, as my memory, understandably, is not as keen as was in those bygone times to which you refer) your beautiful words of joyous love have returned me to the enchanted days and nights we may have shared. Now let's get on with it.
(Love that poem!)
Fondly,
Don
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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My Dearest Don,
Sadly, you must have me confused with another. As I am certain, had we shared such beautiful sentiments and lingered in those " Mountain highs"... you most certainly would have remembered! ;- p Such a love would reside in your soul forever. Alas, tis karma that has kept us apart! Perhaps it's for the best, as I am a free spirit and you my have spent a lifetime of longing...Take heart love, what's meant to be ~ will always be.
Susan
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO SUSANJOHN: I always like anything that speaks of love. My favorite speakers of love are women. Why? Because the first speaker of love to me was, Mom. I was but a babe... but I understood every word she said to me. And they made me feel good and happy. Isn't it
a wonderful feeling to,"KNOW," that somebody loves you? And I have imagined that it's even a better feeling to, "KNOW," that you love someone. God bless you, SusanJohn. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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HELLO SUSANJOHN: I always like anything that speaks of love. My favorite speakers of love are women. Why? Because the first speaker of love to me was, Mom. I was but a babe... but I understood every word she said to me. And they made me feel good and happy. Isn't it
a wonderful feeling to,"KNOW," that somebody loves you? And I have imagined that it's even a better feeling to, "KNOW," that you love someone. God bless you, SusanJohn. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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it sounds like you had a wonderful mother :-) Thanks for stopping by and leaving such nice thoughts.
