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God Is Near

He's all around us

8 total reviews 
Comment from cupa tea
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That's really nice. It flows well...It's easy to follow and I allows a child to take natural things they see every day and connect them to God. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
    Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from chrissy8
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What a wonderful and positive poem about God! Such a loving poem that could be read to a child, or an adult for that matter! Love the picture with the sunbeams shining down. I just like the overall tone of this poem, love the rhymes and content in particular. Blessings!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
    Thank you for such a nice review. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem for children that will help them believe in God that made everything from the sun, moon, and stars and all the animals on earth as well as every human who He made uniquely.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thanks for reading and for the nice review, it's always appreciated.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is really beautiful, so beautiful. You've stated so many things. I love this inspirational and very descriptive offering you've served us. I feel like the little child that you're talking to reading this. He is all of those things to me and He does all of those things for me. I thoroughly enjoyed this well written poem. You've really blessed me with this. I will probably read it a few times if I can find it again. Bless you! Very well done! If I had the authority to, then, I would crown you the winner of the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I'm honored that you gave me the six stars, it really made my day. Thanks again!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Sweet, comforting poetry. Children can see and understand God through nature, and this poem is eternal seeds sown into the pure and innocent heart of a child.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thank you for this wonderful review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
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This is z beautiful poem with agreat message. This may have been written for kids but everyone can benevit from it. Nice job! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
    Thank you for this nice review. I really appreciate your taking time to read my poem.
Comment from Tina Crute
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This is a really sweet poem, and one that you could actually read the kids, as it has kind of a sing song bounce to it. I really enjoyed reading it. Best of luck to you and the competition! I think you'll do very well :-)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
    Thank you for this nice review! That is just what my daughter said, she told me it sounded like a Sunday school song. I really appreciate hearing from you.
reply by Tina Crute on 01-Oct-2018
    Your daughter and I are right!
    You are welcome...my pleasure readimg it!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a delightful write for a child ... one can almost envision illustrations to accompany certain stanzas so that the child has wondrous visions to accompany the promises! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
    Thank you for such a nice review! It would be fun to see this with illustrations, maybe someday! :) Thanks for reading and have a blessed day.