FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from Lori Cornetti
I like this very much! With family members doing what family does, biblical truth handed down through the generations. Proverbs 22:6
Train up a child in the way he should go: and when he is old, he will not depart from it.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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I like this very much! With family members doing what family does, biblical truth handed down through the generations. Proverbs 22:6
Train up a child in the way he should go: and when he is old, he will not depart from it.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
Comment from KatyM
Loved it! Grandmothers are so wise! hehe I actually put this through my grammar program I use because I wasn't sure about the part where it says "on the seat" instead of "in the seat" but it came out fine. I was just curious! Love the truth about the Church house. It is so true! It is the people in the church that makes it a church and a church family. We have a saying at our church: "Don't just go to church, Be the church."
Love your writing.
Katy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Loved it! Grandmothers are so wise! hehe I actually put this through my grammar program I use because I wasn't sure about the part where it says "on the seat" instead of "in the seat" but it came out fine. I was just curious! Love the truth about the Church house. It is so true! It is the people in the church that makes it a church and a church family. We have a saying at our church: "Don't just go to church, Be the church."
Love your writing.
Katy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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HELLO: My dear lady, Ms. Katy.
First of all...thank you for being my fan. People like you are my writing inspiration. By now, you know that I'm a children's writer.
And I need encouraging fans like you to cheer me on. Thank you for the stars. Starting now...I am your fan too. I'll be in touch. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Aww thanks for being my fan too! Wish I could say I am a grandmother but no can do! Neither one of my kids are even close to that chapter in their lives. My daughter Kristina is 26, Justin is 23 and in school. Jessica is 10 1/2 forever in heaven and stepson is 32 in Michigan. I am a volunteer at church with the babies twice a month just so I can get some cuddles in. Happy Writing!
Katy
Comment from Poetic Friend
Thank you for enlightening me on the difference between a church and a church house. Until I read this script, I never thought about the difference. Yes, grandmothers usually know best. They are filled with wisdom.
Just a few grammar suggestions for your consideration. Please feel to ignore my suggestions, for I am no grammar expert.
Dad was driving Mom, my brother and me
[h]ome from McDonald's Today.
As usual...we were on the back seat[,]
[p]oking kid stuff at each other.
Mom was sitting up front[,]
[p]oking grown-up stuff at Dad.
Dad's eyes were focused on the road ahead.
He was going, "Uh-humm, Uh-humm," and listening to Mom.
My brother was looking out the window when he said...
"Hey look...a white church."
"That's not a church," I replied.
"That's a church house."
Question marks danced around my brother's head.
"A church house?"
"Yep. There's a difference between a church,
and a church house."
"Howz that?"
"Well...that's a church house.
The church is the people who go there
[t]o worship God together."
"Ooooo...is that right?"
"Yeah."
"How do you know?
Who told you that?"
"Mom told me that when she was a kid...
Gramma told her that."
"We'll...Gramma has never been wrong, ya know."
"Yes, I Know."
Thank you for sharing this wonderfully written script. Have a great weekend.
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Thank you for enlightening me on the difference between a church and a church house. Until I read this script, I never thought about the difference. Yes, grandmothers usually know best. They are filled with wisdom.
Just a few grammar suggestions for your consideration. Please feel to ignore my suggestions, for I am no grammar expert.
Dad was driving Mom, my brother and me
[h]ome from McDonald's Today.
As usual...we were on the back seat[,]
[p]oking kid stuff at each other.
Mom was sitting up front[,]
[p]oking grown-up stuff at Dad.
Dad's eyes were focused on the road ahead.
He was going, "Uh-humm, Uh-humm," and listening to Mom.
My brother was looking out the window when he said...
"Hey look...a white church."
"That's not a church," I replied.
"That's a church house."
Question marks danced around my brother's head.
"A church house?"
"Yep. There's a difference between a church,
and a church house."
"Howz that?"
"Well...that's a church house.
The church is the people who go there
[t]o worship God together."
"Ooooo...is that right?"
"Yeah."
"How do you know?
Who told you that?"
"Mom told me that when she was a kid...
Gramma told her that."
"We'll...Gramma has never been wrong, ya know."
"Yes, I Know."
Thank you for sharing this wonderfully written script. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
