Comment from KatyM

Excellent

I liked this. However, I have a question for this part: As Adam approached the waterfall,
A maiden did see him, and uttered a call.
According to my grammar program, there is no comma between him and the word and.
My question is though: Where did the maiden come from? In the garden before The Fall, there was only Adam and Eve. So where did the maiden come from? Just curious.
Happy Writing
katy

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018

HELLO KATY: I'm glad to hear from you, my friend. As we know, Moses wrote the book of GENESIS. As we know, "All scripture was inspired by God." Therefore when Moses wrote the Book of GENESIS, he wrote what God inspired him to write. Open your Bible and read what Moses wrote in chapter : 4, in verses 13 through verse 15. Evidently there were other people here on earth before the fall. God just didn't inspire Adam to write about them until GENESIS, chapter 4, and verses 13 through 15. Thank you for asking me this question. This is not my answer to it. The answer to it is found in our Holy Bible. God bless you, Katy. Cordially: rhonnie69.

reply by KatyM on 01-Oct-2018

Interesting...will have to check it out. Thanks

Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

Hi. The ninth verse from the bottom has a spelling error. You did a great job with rhyming. I'd call this more if a poem though. It is a story, but the beat and pace really read like poetry to me. I enjoyed the work. Good job.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018