Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

Still with you, Tony. Humorous little 'doubles entendres continue between Charles and Helen. And Helen continues to play Scheherazade as she goes on with the story of how she lost her sister. I like your characters. Next!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Adrienne. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Yes, incorrigible is certainly one word for dear old Helen... lol

Another very good chapter.

Attention to detail is excellent as are the descriptive elements.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Gareth. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I could just picture the scene where she told the man she was Charles mistress, LOL, classic! The story is unfolding beautifully, and what a lovely story she told too. This really is an enchanting story, Tony, and I love it. I've never got a six this far into the week, otherwise you would have had it. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Sandra. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Pity I did not save my last six for you, Tony! Always superb in every sense of the word. A five will have to do today. You always end your stories at a point where I am just getting warmed up. My delight is a good, long read.

I do have several articles up for review that need your excellent eye. "Clovis" is my flash fiction contest entry. You may enjoy it!

All my best,
Sally

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Sally. Most supportive, and much appreciated.
I'll try to get to your writing very soon. I've had a busy couple of weeks with very little time for reviewing, but hope thing will ease off soon.
Best wishes, Tony

reply by Sally Law on 28-Sep-2018

Me too! Very busy! I appreciate it whenever you can. No worries.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with this chapter, Tony. I like the part about dinner on the balcony. I can hardly wait to find out more about the letter. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Jan. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I can give you a lift up these. It's on my way home."....there
Mystery increasing...genocidal pervert added to mix...lacroix..and Bangkok Thailand for the girls to fly to
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Jenny. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from apky

Excellent

Again, another riveting chapter here, so well-written I groaned when it came to the end. I could have read forever. I also enjoyed all the exotic places and bit of history included in the story. Precisely the kind of book I love reading: informative and exotic.

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Yes, it was Michael who recommended that we came(come) here.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Aki. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Thanks, too, for the grammar catch! Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is first class escapist literature. When I went touring in France in the nineties nothing like this happened to me. It is totally unbelievable but... you desperately want to believe it.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Jim. One can only dream what might have been! Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were both excellent and exceptional!
Adjective Content and Objective Content were both excellent exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for this and have a Blessed day?
Doctor Ricky 1024

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Ricky. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written chapter. It seems that luck follows the couple wherever they go, there is more information to make their quest easier. It is always the powerful people that misuse and abuse their followers.

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review and comments, Sandra. Most supportive, and much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony