Wake Up Call
Your eyes don't lie!58 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are sad, interesting and
thought provoking. The reader pondered on the theme of
this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the both
the words and theme of this poem.
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are sad, interesting and
thought provoking. The reader pondered on the theme of
this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the both
the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from kiwijenny
I see a lot of prompts about mirrors...are we Michael Jackson seeing the man in the mirror?
I love your reflective..A faint flash behind her eyes..
I love the shedding her self pity
Well penned
God bless
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I see a lot of prompts about mirrors...are we Michael Jackson seeing the man in the mirror?
I love your reflective..A faint flash behind her eyes..
I love the shedding her self pity
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from royowen
Oh if only we could look into the past, not recapture, but to see the journey made down that path. The memories we have are merely ghosts of another time. Not really understood even now, but noted milestones of our past, only God knows there true affect on the future. Beautifully and reflectively written, poignant, collective, mental meanderings well done Diana, blessings, Roy
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Oh if only we could look into the past, not recapture, but to see the journey made down that path. The memories we have are merely ghosts of another time. Not really understood even now, but noted milestones of our past, only God knows there true affect on the future. Beautifully and reflectively written, poignant, collective, mental meanderings well done Diana, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Diana, excellent. I wonder how much time we all spend looking at the mirror. I like how your protagonist sees much more than the surface appearance. Her resolution at the end is great. Have a great day. Hugh
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Diana, excellent. I wonder how much time we all spend looking at the mirror. I like how your protagonist sees much more than the surface appearance. Her resolution at the end is great. Have a great day. Hugh
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
Comment from Joan E.
Your poem gives new meaning to "Mirror, mirror on the wall..." Thank you for describing it as "General Poetry" so that we can assume it is not autobiographical. I appreciated the "specter" ultimately "Shedding her self pity" and focusing on life in the present. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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Your poem gives new meaning to "Mirror, mirror on the wall..." Thank you for describing it as "General Poetry" so that we can assume it is not autobiographical. I appreciated the "specter" ultimately "Shedding her self pity" and focusing on life in the present. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
Comment from larrybarsky
Hey there artasylum... thanks for this interesting take on The Mirror Contest... great job and I'm keeping my fingers crossed... New here and looking forward to reading more. yours, dian
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Hey there artasylum... thanks for this interesting take on The Mirror Contest... great job and I'm keeping my fingers crossed... New here and looking forward to reading more. yours, dian
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from kahpot
Excellent as your eyes do not lie and neither does the mirror, this is a wonderful poem on the provided subject, great artwork to enhance these words, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent as your eyes do not lie and neither does the mirror, this is a wonderful poem on the provided subject, great artwork to enhance these words, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from Lady Jane
interesting take on the mirror contest, dear writer. I was anticipating rhyme and it never came, but that's ok. This worked. It flows well with excellent verbiage and content. The color contrast was an excellent choice as was the photo. I love that she shed sell pity and looked Ito the future... sometimes its best to leave the past where it is...in the past. Well done writer with this entry. I wish you all the best of luck.
Janelle
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interesting take on the mirror contest, dear writer. I was anticipating rhyme and it never came, but that's ok. This worked. It flows well with excellent verbiage and content. The color contrast was an excellent choice as was the photo. I love that she shed sell pity and looked Ito the future... sometimes its best to leave the past where it is...in the past. Well done writer with this entry. I wish you all the best of luck.
Janelle
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
