Wake Up Call
Your eyes don't lie!58 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a terrific poem on living life in the now. Get out of the past and carry on with it. These are great lines:
"A wake up call is answered
it pulls her mostly back;
Shedding her self-pity,
she returns to present tense."
Marilyn
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This is a terrific poem on living life in the now. Get out of the past and carry on with it. These are great lines:
"A wake up call is answered
it pulls her mostly back;
Shedding her self-pity,
she returns to present tense."
Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
Comment from Sankey
Another great little poem. I can't figure out the format or probably Free type for sure but it was a good read. Also a lovely choice of photo is that you?
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Another great little poem. I can't figure out the format or probably Free type for sure but it was a good read. Also a lovely choice of photo is that you?
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, this is a terrific entry for the mirror contest, my friend.
Sometimes people do fall into a life they didn't expect to be living in.
I suppose it could go either way good or bad.
Good luck in the contest! ~Kerry
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Hello there, this is a terrific entry for the mirror contest, my friend.
Sometimes people do fall into a life they didn't expect to be living in.
I suppose it could go either way good or bad.
Good luck in the contest! ~Kerry
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
Comment from Adri7enne
It's true that sometimes, staring into our own face, we are suddenly jolted into the present moment where life always happens. I enjoyed reading your free verse poem. I wish you luck in the contest.
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It's true that sometimes, staring into our own face, we are suddenly jolted into the present moment where life always happens. I enjoyed reading your free verse poem. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
Comment from Writeling
I really like some of the ideas here, but I'm not sure about the title.... which is a phrase much used. I admire:
'Shedding her self-pity,
she returns to present tense.'
with best wishes, Writeling
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I really like some of the ideas here, but I'm not sure about the title.... which is a phrase much used. I admire:
'Shedding her self-pity,
she returns to present tense.'
with best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
Comment from Kay Seed
Wow, this poem cuts to the heart. You did a good job of incorporating 1st person and 3rd person views. Good poetry appears to come effortlessly for you. Definitely a top contender for the mirror prompt contest! Excellent job!
-Kay
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Wow, this poem cuts to the heart. You did a good job of incorporating 1st person and 3rd person views. Good poetry appears to come effortlessly for you. Definitely a top contender for the mirror prompt contest! Excellent job!
-Kay
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
Comment from mackenzietastan
This is a very timely poem. At first I thought maybe it was going to go in a creepy direction with the reflection, but I think we all have a love-hate relationship with the person in the mirror.
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This is a very timely poem. At first I thought maybe it was going to go in a creepy direction with the reflection, but I think we all have a love-hate relationship with the person in the mirror.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
Comment from Rickie1
ARTASYLUM
Very descriptive and interpretative pf what we see when we look into a mirror. We don't see ourselves objectively but the way we want to be seen or think we think how we should be seen. It takes confidence and strength of spirit to see us as we are and live in peace with it.
Rickie
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ARTASYLUM
Very descriptive and interpretative pf what we see when we look into a mirror. We don't see ourselves objectively but the way we want to be seen or think we think how we should be seen. It takes confidence and strength of spirit to see us as we are and live in peace with it.
Rickie
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from Benny Beeharry
A beautiful write for sure!
A look in the past and a great strength needed to pull oneself from self pity. Self pity is always a dangerous pitfall. Makes you live n the past and pitying oneself.
I know it,
Well done you are on sure footing present tense, so rearrange things to your benefit.
Great.
Danny Jock
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A beautiful write for sure!
A look in the past and a great strength needed to pull oneself from self pity. Self pity is always a dangerous pitfall. Makes you live n the past and pitying oneself.
I know it,
Well done you are on sure footing present tense, so rearrange things to your benefit.
Great.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good entry for the prompt. I hope it did well.
This seems to be about a woman who finally breaks free from a bad relationship. She is leaving and becoming herself again.
Keep writing
Joan
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This is a good entry for the prompt. I hope it did well.
This seems to be about a woman who finally breaks free from a bad relationship. She is leaving and becoming herself again.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
