God Only Does So
Contest ended in September 2018 Read Author Notes First57 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is an interesting story with these unusual words laced throughout. I'm glad the red mom got what she deserved, her kindness to all the chickens. I take it with all the colors represented here that it's more than a chicken and perhaps kindness towards mankind in general.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally
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This is an interesting story with these unusual words laced throughout. I'm glad the red mom got what she deserved, her kindness to all the chickens. I take it with all the colors represented here that it's more than a chicken and perhaps kindness towards mankind in general.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Interesting. I am grateful to you for providing the lengthy author notes or I would have been very lost and confused! I have to admit it! This is unique and an example of looking for creativity outside the box, which poetry often does and should do. The art choice is a good one for your poetry. Well done.
Wendy
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Interesting. I am grateful to you for providing the lengthy author notes or I would have been very lost and confused! I have to admit it! This is unique and an example of looking for creativity outside the box, which poetry often does and should do. The art choice is a good one for your poetry. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
your words had me spelled bound and after I read the information I understood your poem even more
You did a marvelous job
thank you very much for sharing
cookie
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You captured my attention from the first line to the last
your words had me spelled bound and after I read the information I understood your poem even more
You did a marvelous job
thank you very much for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Blue Hendrix
You fulfilled all the requirements of the contest and this was a unique spin on the poem I was a Lil confused at first but then I realized you had to use certain words. Good luck.
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You fulfilled all the requirements of the contest and this was a unique spin on the poem I was a Lil confused at first but then I realized you had to use certain words. Good luck.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Anita Anderson
This was interesting to read and I really enjoy the idea of the theme that God is "religion free". And I really liked the thought that God takes a soul and helps them to redeem themselves in other forms such as Red Mom. Nice.
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This was interesting to read and I really enjoy the idea of the theme that God is "religion free". And I really liked the thought that God takes a soul and helps them to redeem themselves in other forms such as Red Mom. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
Well, this sounds like a difficult poem to write because there are lots of rules you have to fulfill.
The story you tell is fun to read.
Thanks so much for sharing.
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Well, this sounds like a difficult poem to write because there are lots of rules you have to fulfill.
The story you tell is fun to read.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from DonandVicki
The second poem of yours that I have reviewed this evening and I am impressed with the imagination that you express so profoundly in this work especially. I am anxious to read more of your work.
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The second poem of yours that I have reviewed this evening and I am impressed with the imagination that you express so profoundly in this work especially. I am anxious to read more of your work.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Cedar
This is an insightful poem, even though I did find it a little difficult to follow.
This must have been a very interesting contest.
God bless you...Bill
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This is an insightful poem, even though I did find it a little difficult to follow.
This must have been a very interesting contest.
God bless you...Bill
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I don't know who is coming up with these prompts, but I think they keep forgetting to take their meds. I am not even going to check if this meets all of these whacky requirements. You deserve a "5" simply for trying. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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I don't know who is coming up with these prompts, but I think they keep forgetting to take their meds. I am not even going to check if this meets all of these whacky requirements. You deserve a "5" simply for trying. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
Comment from Joy Graham
Congratulations for using all the required words for your contest entry. Your chickens sound wonderful. I didn't know they kept stats on what days chickens were born and that it made a difference to how they looked. Fascinating.
Joy xx
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Congratulations for using all the required words for your contest entry. Your chickens sound wonderful. I didn't know they kept stats on what days chickens were born and that it made a difference to how they looked. Fascinating.
Joy xx
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
