God Only Does So
Contest ended in September 2018 Read Author Notes First57 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have heard of counting sheep, but it seems here that it is chickens that are having their turn! An unusual write and I suppose chickens have a role to play and they do it without any objection! He he he, love Dolly x
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I have heard of counting sheep, but it seems here that it is chickens that are having their turn! An unusual write and I suppose chickens have a role to play and they do it without any objection! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from lyenochka
That's quite a challenging contest but you used all those odd words and give us a picture of hope for people as well as hens and chickens. Heaven will have surprises for everyone.
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That's quite a challenging contest but you used all those odd words and give us a picture of hope for people as well as hens and chickens. Heaven will have surprises for everyone.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from Air Spirit
Well you certainly get a six-er for creativity, originality, and being very unique... I am unsure though, how to interpret this... are the chickens used as a metaphor? If so, are they representing all the different shades and colors of humans, and thereby showing God accepts one and all, regardless of labels or how they were judged while on this earth.. Perhaps this was just a 'flight of fancy' that was for fun, and really doesn't have any message... but with your picture showing Jesus opening the gate to heaven, I would think there would be an important message there... is there a message, or was this just a flight of fancy?
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Well you certainly get a six-er for creativity, originality, and being very unique... I am unsure though, how to interpret this... are the chickens used as a metaphor? If so, are they representing all the different shades and colors of humans, and thereby showing God accepts one and all, regardless of labels or how they were judged while on this earth.. Perhaps this was just a 'flight of fancy' that was for fun, and really doesn't have any message... but with your picture showing Jesus opening the gate to heaven, I would think there would be an important message there... is there a message, or was this just a flight of fancy?
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"God Only Does So", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I only have fives left.
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"God Only Does So", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I only have fives left.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
I don't pretend to understand this. Maybe I'm just not a deep enough thinker. Maybe the significance of all those chickens shall someday come home to roost. Who knows.
However, technically all I can say is that you have managed to satisfy the complicated parameters of the contest.... which I guess is cause for "Well done!"
Bill (WildWithWords)
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I don't pretend to understand this. Maybe I'm just not a deep enough thinker. Maybe the significance of all those chickens shall someday come home to roost. Who knows.
However, technically all I can say is that you have managed to satisfy the complicated parameters of the contest.... which I guess is cause for "Well done!"
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from l.raven
HI Alcreator, OMG...your created something different my sweet friend...that is for sure...not a norm for you...very different...and I must say...you did use all the words...and yes God gives us what He feels we should have...well done you...and I love this picture...love Linda xxoo
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HI Alcreator, OMG...your created something different my sweet friend...that is for sure...not a norm for you...very different...and I must say...you did use all the words...and yes God gives us what He feels we should have...well done you...and I love this picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
A most interesting poem, ACD. Don't think I've ever read one quite like it, and it does tell a story in the process.
A most interesting contest you've created and I wish you much luck in the booths. :)
Gloria
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A most interesting poem, ACD. Don't think I've ever read one quite like it, and it does tell a story in the process.
A most interesting contest you've created and I wish you much luck in the booths. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from Janet Foor
Very clever an creative as per usual for you. The challenge of writing certain words was fulfilled beautifully in the story.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
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Very clever an creative as per usual for you. The challenge of writing certain words was fulfilled beautifully in the story.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting story you have penned about Red mom who prayed to God every dawn. You used very good words with nice colors in the words. That was a lot of chickens. My grandson has four chickens and I thought that was a lot. I enjoyed reading this story you have penned for the writing prompt. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting story you have penned about Red mom who prayed to God every dawn. You used very good words with nice colors in the words. That was a lot of chickens. My grandson has four chickens and I thought that was a lot. I enjoyed reading this story you have penned for the writing prompt. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
Comment from RGstar
This was certainly different, and as always, credit must be given when due. Innovation and artistry have always worked well together. Good to see new ideas and personal flavours coming to the fore.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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This was certainly different, and as always, credit must be given when due. Innovation and artistry have always worked well together. Good to see new ideas and personal flavours coming to the fore.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
