God Only Does So
Contest ended in September 2018 Read Author Notes First57 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
What a very creative poem you have written. I love the colors you chose to add, it enhanced and amplified a fun, energetic verse. I wish you good luck in this contest!
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What a very creative poem you have written. I love the colors you chose to add, it enhanced and amplified a fun, energetic verse. I wish you good luck in this contest!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from robyn corum
A,
I'm sorry, my friend. *smile*. I realize you are supremely creative and really, really fun, but I just don't get these crazy poems. (Sorry!).
They just don't make sense to me. I would love to see you put your talents to work writing a simple poem that shows your talent. Please consider?? Thanks and good luck!
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A,
I'm sorry, my friend. *smile*. I realize you are supremely creative and really, really fun, but I just don't get these crazy poems. (Sorry!).
They just don't make sense to me. I would love to see you put your talents to work writing a simple poem that shows your talent. Please consider?? Thanks and good luck!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - you have done a magnificent job here meeting those somewhat demanding restrictions in this particular contest! :) :) I took one look at them and ran the other way -- beautiful story in the form of a free verse! :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
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Wow - you have done a magnificent job here meeting those somewhat demanding restrictions in this particular contest! :) :) I took one look at them and ran the other way -- beautiful story in the form of a free verse! :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from Benny Beeharry
This is a brilliant write very amusing and interesting. I really enjoyed reading it. The numbers and the names sound cryptic at first but they add so much to the story. I love he village background, the simplicity and originality.
Danny Jock
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This is a brilliant write very amusing and interesting. I really enjoyed reading it. The numbers and the names sound cryptic at first but they add so much to the story. I love he village background, the simplicity and originality.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from Possummagic
This is a beautifully written and lovingly crafted so that it flows nicely on the tongue. I love the corresponding figures, 13 blue chickens born on Saturdays, 40 black born on Sunday and 347 born through the rest of the week and all after 13 dreams... Oh my goodness what a woman! PM
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This is a beautifully written and lovingly crafted so that it flows nicely on the tongue. I love the corresponding figures, 13 blue chickens born on Saturdays, 40 black born on Sunday and 347 born through the rest of the week and all after 13 dreams... Oh my goodness what a woman! PM
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from Mike J
Nice poem, I appreciate you making the poem in your own style. There's good story telling going on throughout the poem. Best of luck in the contest, thanks for sharing
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Nice poem, I appreciate you making the poem in your own style. There's good story telling going on throughout the poem. Best of luck in the contest, thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from dragonpoet
Good use of all the words. This shows the imagination of the child and the strength of dreams and prayers. But it is sad she died at 4. But she finally got all that she prayed for.
Keep writing and good luck in the contest.
dp
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Good use of all the words. This shows the imagination of the child and the strength of dreams and prayers. But it is sad she died at 4. But she finally got all that she prayed for.
Keep writing and good luck in the contest.
dp
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from Zue65
Your poetic style is quite refreshing and unique. This is the first I have ever reviewed a poem of this format. I enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing your unique talent.
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Your poetic style is quite refreshing and unique. This is the first I have ever reviewed a poem of this format. I enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing your unique talent.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
Comment from diamondbogle
Im not a spiritual person but I really enjoyed this. You did a good job of praising God. I loved the art work you chose to go with it. It really helped to bring it all together.
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Im not a spiritual person but I really enjoyed this. You did a good job of praising God. I loved the art work you chose to go with it. It really helped to bring it all together.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
Comment from Neonewman
What an intoxicating piece you have delivered to your reviewing audience. I found this mesmerizing in a sense and thoroughly enjoyed myself.
God bless
Steve
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What an intoxicating piece you have delivered to your reviewing audience. I found this mesmerizing in a sense and thoroughly enjoyed myself.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
