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Comment from aryr
I enjoyed the dialogue and the fact that you made the speech sound as if it did indeed come from the front porch of a cabin after a group dinner. It was good of Rosenna to share her tales. Very well done, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed the dialogue and the fact that you made the speech sound as if it did indeed come from the front porch of a cabin after a group dinner. It was good of Rosenna to share her tales. Very well done, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you for going back and checking it out, even though there was no advantage point or buck wise. Im glad you enjoyed it.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
And so it begins. Sorry I just now got back to this tale. I will try to stay up as soon as I get to the latest installment. Let's hear it, Granny.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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And so it begins. Sorry I just now got back to this tale. I will try to stay up as soon as I get to the latest installment. Let's hear it, Granny.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Thanks for your support. I hope I don't disappoint. Thanks for the 5 star.
Comment from kiwijenny
"You mind your tongue in my house Nathan Carter, I'll not stand for blasphemes," Roseanna
said. You held me at this. I am very interested and want to be along for the ride.I live in Russellville Logan County ...southern Kentucky .Is Carter Holler near here? It was called Rogues Harbor in the 1800s
God bless
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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"You mind your tongue in my house Nathan Carter, I'll not stand for blasphemes," Roseanna
said. You held me at this. I am very interested and want to be along for the ride.I live in Russellville Logan County ...southern Kentucky .Is Carter Holler near here? It was called Rogues Harbor in the 1800s
God bless
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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It's north eastern part of the state . I was stationed at Fort Campbell twice.i' glad youre hooked, chapter one is comimg to orrow. As far as salty laguage there may be a damn or hell sprinkled in. There won't be sex, but. Therell be romance. It should be a fun read, necause im having fun writing it. As always, thank yo for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Sally Law
It looks like you have a fine novel in the making here with this piece. I enjoyed and understood what I call-- Georgia speak! Very colorful and descriptive. I think this novella will do very well here on FanStory. I look forward to the next installments.
Kind regards,
Sally
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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It looks like you have a fine novel in the making here with this piece. I enjoyed and understood what I call-- Georgia speak! Very colorful and descriptive. I think this novella will do very well here on FanStory. I look forward to the next installments.
Kind regards,
Sally
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope it meets your expectation.
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This is my kind of thing. I am also involved in scrapbooking. I research and keep the historical archives of my family. I have traced one family line to the 1600?s through grave and war records. I belong to Ancestry.com, as well.
Comment from LaFrance
Great prologue. I can not wait to hear tales from outside of Carter Holler, Kentucky in 1860 through the eyes of grandma Rosanna Carter. I love the written dialect as well.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Great prologue. I can not wait to hear tales from outside of Carter Holler, Kentucky in 1860 through the eyes of grandma Rosanna Carter. I love the written dialect as well.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Check out the blurb for it on my portfoilio.Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from country ranch writer
I am sure Granny has many memories to tell the grandyoungs and it keeps the excited wanting more and mor. It was the way it was back then. No TV's and such.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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I am sure Granny has many memories to tell the grandyoungs and it keeps the excited wanting more and mor. It was the way it was back then. No TV's and such.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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She has at l one book full.oh for the days when kids didn have thave ear buds in and people were glued to their phone screeln appreciate the reading and reviewing you readeview.
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My great grandpa was our story teller
Comment from Lady Jane
Or(,) they might be funny - edit suggestion
'Tell us a story(,) Granny. ' - just a comma needed :)
"Tell us how you and Grandpa met.(") -missing end quotes here :)
"Hell(,) maw(,) start from the beginning, " - just commas need to set off who he's speaking to :)
"Yes'm, (")-missing end quotes here :)
Just a suggestion -onto 60 years ago," Roseanna "began." - only because the word 'said' has been used many times previously and she's beginning here tale here, I think began could work. What do you think?
What a great prologue. I look forward to reading the book as it comes to fruition. It definitely has the back woods, country feel I grew up with in the deep south. Excellent dialogue with an engaging tale. You've set up your book with great interest and insight into the family we'll be reading about. I'm thinking Nate is a little whipper snapper and is gonna prove to be a handful :) A few nits I've pointed out above. Once fixed, let me know and I'll come back and put this up to the five star it deserves immediately. Excellent job, Earl.
Janelle
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Or(,) they might be funny - edit suggestion
'Tell us a story(,) Granny. ' - just a comma needed :)
"Tell us how you and Grandpa met.(") -missing end quotes here :)
"Hell(,) maw(,) start from the beginning, " - just commas need to set off who he's speaking to :)
"Yes'm, (")-missing end quotes here :)
Just a suggestion -onto 60 years ago," Roseanna "began." - only because the word 'said' has been used many times previously and she's beginning here tale here, I think began could work. What do you think?
What a great prologue. I look forward to reading the book as it comes to fruition. It definitely has the back woods, country feel I grew up with in the deep south. Excellent dialogue with an engaging tale. You've set up your book with great interest and insight into the family we'll be reading about. I'm thinking Nate is a little whipper snapper and is gonna prove to be a handful :) A few nits I've pointed out above. Once fixed, let me know and I'll come back and put this up to the five star it deserves immediately. Excellent job, Earl.
Janelle
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the pointers. If I had a nomination left you'd get it.I took all your suggestions and implemented them, I hope it looks better.
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I bet it does :) Going to upgrade now!
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done :)
