Dazzling Butterflies
A 5-7-5 poem26 total reviews
Comment from Rickie1
Pam
Dazzling for sure, I love the bright flowers as well. The butterflies return shortly after spring flowers chase away the winter blahs. Thank you for the haiku.
Rickie
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Pam
Dazzling for sure, I love the bright flowers as well. The butterflies return shortly after spring flowers chase away the winter blahs. Thank you for the haiku.
Rickie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Rickie for your wonderful review. Take care
Comment from Boogienights
This is very nice, either way it looks like a winner to me. Beautiful imagery, I think this will do very well in the three line poem contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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This is very nice, either way it looks like a winner to me. Beautiful imagery, I think this will do very well in the three line poem contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Boogienights for your very lovely review
Comment from Possummagic
This is beautiful. I love the imagery and Short is sweet where we are restricted by numbers of words we can use. I enjoyed this piece and loved your imagery PM
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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This is beautiful. I love the imagery and Short is sweet where we are restricted by numbers of words we can use. I enjoyed this piece and loved your imagery PM
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you PM so very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. And a lovely review it is. Take care
Comment from Pantygynt
Quite so. All haiku are three liners but only some three liners are haiku, and this is one of those. It will be judged against other three liners and not as an haiku, so we must wait and see what transpires. It has the criteria of both forms very adequately.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Quite so. All haiku are three liners but only some three liners are haiku, and this is one of those. It will be judged against other three liners and not as an haiku, so we must wait and see what transpires. It has the criteria of both forms very adequately.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Jim for always taking the time to write a very informative and encouraging review. Take care
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three line poem about the butterflies enjoying a fresh buffet of flowers nectar in the middle of spring. An excellent photo to complenent your work.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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A very well-written three line poem about the butterflies enjoying a fresh buffet of flowers nectar in the middle of spring. An excellent photo to complenent your work.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, I recognize the summary in the last line, This is a true Haiku. Each word, carefully defines, the butterflies and their ascent into our world of 'middle days'. The ending is wonderfully put, and summarises well, the sheer beauty of butterflies in our midst. Thank you for sharing your talent for seeing with a poet's second set of eyes.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Yes, I recognize the summary in the last line, This is a true Haiku. Each word, carefully defines, the butterflies and their ascent into our world of 'middle days'. The ending is wonderfully put, and summarises well, the sheer beauty of butterflies in our midst. Thank you for sharing your talent for seeing with a poet's second set of eyes.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Jesse for your lovely review. Nice to see you tonight. Take care
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Hi Pam
It's nice to check in with you. I hope you have a great evening.
Jesse
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I wish you luck with your haiku Pam, so uplifting with memories of spring and it delighted me, especially as we are entering Autumn, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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I wish you luck with your haiku Pam, so uplifting with memories of spring and it delighted me, especially as we are entering Autumn, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you Dolly for your lovely review. Take care
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Dazzling Butterflies", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each word is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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"Dazzling Butterflies", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each word is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you duchessofdrumb. Thank you for the virtual six stars and your lovely review. You use your six stars faster than I do. Lol
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Pam, you're more than welcome.
I thought six stars were supposed to be splashed!
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from jenintorre
You have written a lovely three line poem and chosen a very good illustration to enhance it. I think it is a very good contender for the competition. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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You have written a lovely three line poem and chosen a very good illustration to enhance it. I think it is a very good contender for the competition. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Nice to see you tonight Jen. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from meeshu
a great entry for either contest, really. my first glance at the picture I thought you had found the worlds fattest butterfly. good luck Pam..................meeshu
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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a great entry for either contest, really. my first glance at the picture I thought you had found the worlds fattest butterfly. good luck Pam..................meeshu
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Lol. Meeshu. You made me laugh out loud. Fattest butterfly. LMAO. How does Cyndy put up with such a jokester? Just kidding. You are fun. Thank you for your funny review
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look at that picture. it was my first glimpse at it.
