Always hope, never expect
Tongue in cheek look at belief12 total reviews
Comment from phill doran
Hello Earl
I thought twice before reading this as I tend to be wary of people expressing their beliefs, but I am glad I did read it.
As a piece of writing it is very, very good. It flows, is coherent and is a well presented succession of interconnected thoughts. Nothing jars.
With regards to the content, it shows tolerance, humour and a practical approach to life and faith(s) which is very refreshing in the internet age of he-who-shouts-loudest-wins - or in the case of the religion forum on this site: victory by endurance!
Your dismount thought: "...Then when you go you get ferried across the River Styx by Thor only to be judged by an elephant with eight arms who throws lightening bolts at the earth..." is superb.
I really liked this and I wish you the very best at the booth with it.
Cheers
phill
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello Earl
I thought twice before reading this as I tend to be wary of people expressing their beliefs, but I am glad I did read it.
As a piece of writing it is very, very good. It flows, is coherent and is a well presented succession of interconnected thoughts. Nothing jars.
With regards to the content, it shows tolerance, humour and a practical approach to life and faith(s) which is very refreshing in the internet age of he-who-shouts-loudest-wins - or in the case of the religion forum on this site: victory by endurance!
Your dismount thought: "...Then when you go you get ferried across the River Styx by Thor only to be judged by an elephant with eight arms who throws lightening bolts at the earth..." is superb.
I really liked this and I wish you the very best at the booth with it.
Cheers
phill
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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I am glad you enjoyed it, that's why I write. Thanks for reading and the great review.
Comment from kiwijenny
Dung beetle's are awesome...you know they can lift 1000 x their own weight...without them we'd be in a mess. Dung nab it. But I'm going to stick with God
72 virgins sounds coo.....cool? But wouldn't some experience be necessary? I've never liked that system of thought.. it's just grossly offensive to the older woman
Lol
God bless
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Dung beetle's are awesome...you know they can lift 1000 x their own weight...without them we'd be in a mess. Dung nab it. But I'm going to stick with God
72 virgins sounds coo.....cool? But wouldn't some experience be necessary? I've never liked that system of thought.. it's just grossly offensive to the older woman
Lol
God bless
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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I had no intention to offend older women, I love older women. I think God is the safest bet. I just used dung beetles substitute whatever you like. Thanks for reading and the great rating.
