What You Express That's Your Base
A 4 Line Poem; You're sum of words, scribe and or expression133 total reviews
Comment from ronnie k
I read for reviewing but I found a part of me within the picture frame, there I received the gift of living, with the chore of knowing there is a power greater than, amen.
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I read for reviewing but I found a part of me within the picture frame, there I received the gift of living, with the chore of knowing there is a power greater than, amen.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from robyn corum
Al,
I have to agree with the words of this wise post. We are made up of all the things we say and do - and we can't escape that --ever. *smile*
Thanks for another interesting poem - good luck!
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Al,
I have to agree with the words of this wise post. We are made up of all the things we say and do - and we can't escape that --ever. *smile*
Thanks for another interesting poem - good luck!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from victor 66
Alcreator, I believe you are an unconsciously chronic acrostic poet. I just read several of your poems and feel there is no help for you and you continue to deny whom you really are. However, you do have faith, and that may save you from being an unconsciously chronic acrostic poet one day. I wish you well.
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Alcreator, I believe you are an unconsciously chronic acrostic poet. I just read several of your poems and feel there is no help for you and you continue to deny whom you really are. However, you do have faith, and that may save you from being an unconsciously chronic acrostic poet one day. I wish you well.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from Janet Foor
There is great truth in this well written 15 word poem. Your comments are right on the money. We are the sum of our words, scribe, actions and expressions.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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There is great truth in this well written 15 word poem. Your comments are right on the money. We are the sum of our words, scribe, actions and expressions.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from Possummagic
Beautifully written and lovely crafted. A perfect entry for the 15 word poetry contest. I love how we can say so much with so few words. It is the challenge we all practice often. PM
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Beautifully written and lovely crafted. A perfect entry for the 15 word poetry contest. I love how we can say so much with so few words. It is the challenge we all practice often. PM
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from jdrhye
Interesting perspective and form. It has a questioning tone and sets the reader up to question many areas of life and in what way to deal and express. Time seems to be of the essence. Intriguing!
J
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Interesting perspective and form. It has a questioning tone and sets the reader up to question many areas of life and in what way to deal and express. Time seems to be of the essence. Intriguing!
J
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I like what you have expressed here, always in life we should try to RISE- Towards God, against evil, and to be better humans. A wonderful uprising write indeed kindest regards and God bless you Meia x
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I like what you have expressed here, always in life we should try to RISE- Towards God, against evil, and to be better humans. A wonderful uprising write indeed kindest regards and God bless you Meia x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Insider98
A big message inside 4 lines. We truly are what we say and write, so I think all of us need to improve on these fields. We must think before we say anything, because one day words will become actions. Good luck!
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A big message inside 4 lines. We truly are what we say and write, so I think all of us need to improve on these fields. We must think before we say anything, because one day words will become actions. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Mark D. R.
Terrific imagery overall.
Ages ago, there was a 1973 cult film, 'Steambath.' As a comedy, it was a spin on Paul Sartre's play, 'No Exit.'
Your 'departure' line made me think of this movie. Before exiting the steambath, you had opportunities to express/explain yourself before entering heaven (or hell).
Thanks for those memories.
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Terrific imagery overall.
Ages ago, there was a 1973 cult film, 'Steambath.' As a comedy, it was a spin on Paul Sartre's play, 'No Exit.'
Your 'departure' line made me think of this movie. Before exiting the steambath, you had opportunities to express/explain yourself before entering heaven (or hell).
Thanks for those memories.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Very well said. Yes. We are what we say and write. And most of us could use some improvement. Me, especially. That is quite a prompt to which you wrote. I'm not sure I could ever accomplish it. Thank you for doing so. At least, I know it's possible. Such sage knowledge. Could have been from Solomon. It could mean your departure from a room, a meeting, this life. Good job.
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Very well said. Yes. We are what we say and write. And most of us could use some improvement. Me, especially. That is quite a prompt to which you wrote. I'm not sure I could ever accomplish it. Thank you for doing so. At least, I know it's possible. Such sage knowledge. Could have been from Solomon. It could mean your departure from a room, a meeting, this life. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
