Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words + art make a nice presentation--I like the color scheme, the art, and your well-chosen words. I can 'see; one riverdancing through leaves--great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review Jan. Hah I actually do make a detour when I see a big pile of those noisy leaves just for that sound. The leaves are just beginning to change in vermont and as usual, it's magic. Cheers, j

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A wonderful pairing of the sounds of the natural with the sounds of a man-made music that helps call to mind the cooling temperatures and colorful leaves! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018

Thanks for the insightful review. Haha I actually do make a detour when I see a big pile of crunchy leaves just for the sound it makes. As for the geese, I love to see their ragged little vee's above me, making their way south. Cheers, j

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a great way to address this writing prompt/contest. I love that you focus on the sounds of autumn. Your word choice of "riverdance" is beautiful. I love the sound of geese! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review. I guess there is so much about the colors, we maybe neglect the sounds.I actually do detour when I see a pile of those crunchy leaves, hah Cheers, j