Of God's Disciple
An Acrostic29 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
if you would have put it in an acrostic contest you would have blown us away. if you would have put in a loop contest you would have left us in the dust. so why not win this prompt/contest. so great, kahpot, on so many levels...............meeshu
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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if you would have put it in an acrostic contest you would have blown us away. if you would have put in a loop contest you would have left us in the dust. so why not win this prompt/contest. so great, kahpot, on so many levels...............meeshu
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Wow! this is high praise from an Author I take much learning from, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Wow. This is a tricky challenge, but you not only created an acrostic, but you also added the layer of difficulty with a loop, too. I am impressed. This is a stunning contest entry. I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Wow. This is a tricky challenge, but you not only created an acrostic, but you also added the layer of difficulty with a loop, too. I am impressed. This is a stunning contest entry. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for such an encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Powerful witness to the light of Gospel. Jesus proved life to be eternal, continuing. Insightful and inspiring account of the mission of Christ! Even in darkness, the light shines and opens eyes to see. Faith building poetry based on fact and proof.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Powerful witness to the light of Gospel. Jesus proved life to be eternal, continuing. Insightful and inspiring account of the mission of Christ! Even in darkness, the light shines and opens eyes to see. Faith building poetry based on fact and proof.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, I had a bit of fun with this challenge****kahpot
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this "Poetry in God's appreciation" contest. Yes indeed you've certainly put a good case in this marvellously crafted acrostically generated 123 word work Kimbob. I think you've done a great job of skilfully witnessing God's goodness, well done, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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An excellent entry in this "Poetry in God's appreciation" contest. Yes indeed you've certainly put a good case in this marvellously crafted acrostically generated 123 word work Kimbob. I think you've done a great job of skilfully witnessing God's goodness, well done, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, I am glad you liked it****kahpot
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Most welcome
Comment from Cybertron1986
This was distinctively voiced and well presented in that it clarified many good philosophical points, such as how everyone can "embody" a selfless act. I like the reiteration of religious moral and inspiration. I feel after reading this, I've already went to church. (And that is a good thing). Beautiful!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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This was distinctively voiced and well presented in that it clarified many good philosophical points, such as how everyone can "embody" a selfless act. I like the reiteration of religious moral and inspiration. I feel after reading this, I've already went to church. (And that is a good thing). Beautiful!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much foryour wonderful and encouraging review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Rickie1
Kahpot
Well done with the first letters thing. I haven't seen that before and I like the challenge. It must be difficult to write like that?
Rickie
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Kahpot
Well done with the first letters thing. I haven't seen that before and I like the challenge. It must be difficult to write like that?
Rickie
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, I enjoy trying different forms as it helps me, give it a go****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
You always challenge yourself to do even more, Kahpot! I like how you constructed this looping acrostic poem. You're the only one I know who does this. And I really enjoyed reading the spiritual message of your poem especially that Christ's sacrifice has given us all a future life and that all of us, His creations can embody the Hope we have in Him!
A few grammar comments about the possessive:
"who told one version of faiths incarnation" (faith's)
"Continue through the darkness, seeking lights inspiration" (light's)
"Life to believe that all Gods creations will embody" (God's)
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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You always challenge yourself to do even more, Kahpot! I like how you constructed this looping acrostic poem. You're the only one I know who does this. And I really enjoyed reading the spiritual message of your poem especially that Christ's sacrifice has given us all a future life and that all of us, His creations can embody the Hope we have in Him!
A few grammar comments about the possessive:
"who told one version of faiths incarnation" (faith's)
"Continue through the darkness, seeking lights inspiration" (light's)
"Life to believe that all Gods creations will embody" (God's)
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Many thanks and I have corrected, thank for all your help, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Knighteagle
Wow truly impressive! Met the contest guidelines and took it a step further. Acrostic loop with the required words and it was a continuous thought/statement. Well done with this contest piece, best of luck. This deserves to winn
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Wow truly impressive! Met the contest guidelines and took it a step further. Acrostic loop with the required words and it was a continuous thought/statement. Well done with this contest piece, best of luck. This deserves to winn
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - a beautiful touching acrostic in the form of a loop!! How wonderful!! You have certainly outdone yourself here....and delivered a timeless message as well! ;) Be sure to go in and correct the spelling in your title. ;) ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Wow - a beautiful touching acrostic in the form of a loop!! How wonderful!! You have certainly outdone yourself here....and delivered a timeless message as well! ;) Be sure to go in and correct the spelling in your title. ;) ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much and the correction has been made, much appreciated****kahpot
