Of God's Disciple
An Acrostic29 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
I know with this writing prompt it had to be difficult to write this poem. It's obvious you put a lot of thought and work into it. Nice job! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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I know with this writing prompt it had to be difficult to write this poem. It's obvious you put a lot of thought and work into it. Nice job! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about the life and teaching of Jesus to His disciples to carry forth His doctrine through the ages until today we strive to be like Him.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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A very well-written acrostic poem about the life and teaching of Jesus to His disciples to carry forth His doctrine through the ages until today we strive to be like Him.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
This fits the contest description well. It is a good mix of acrostic and loop poem about the spread of the Christian faith and the promise at the end of a good life.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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This fits the contest description well. It is a good mix of acrostic and loop poem about the spread of the Christian faith and the promise at the end of a good life.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
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You are so kindly welcome, kahpot.
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You are so kindly welcome, kahpot.
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You are so kindly welcome, kahpot.
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi kahpot. This looks like a good entry for the contest. I have never written an acrostic or a loop poem. You didn't have to do the loop part, right? I am not religious and tend not to review religious poetry, but I know for this contest, it is a requirement. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Hi kahpot. This looks like a good entry for the contest. I have never written an acrostic or a loop poem. You didn't have to do the loop part, right? I am not religious and tend not to review religious poetry, but I know for this contest, it is a requirement. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Geeze kahpot, you always do the most difficult poems, with the loop, the acrostic and all the words that needed to be included to contest specifications.
That said, wow this is a fine entry and you'd better win after all this.
Thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Geeze kahpot, you always do the most difficult poems, with the loop, the acrostic and all the words that needed to be included to contest specifications.
That said, wow this is a fine entry and you'd better win after all this.
Thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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My pen has already won, no matter the contest outcome after such a Stella review, many thanks for acknowledging my attempts to improve****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Excellent poetry, Kahpot. I sort of figured you would enter this contest. Very few could offer their praise the way you do poetically. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Excellent poetry, Kahpot. I sort of figured you would enter this contest. Very few could offer their praise the way you do poetically. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from WildWithWords
Congrats for taking on the whole shebang - Acrostic, word-limited, word-inclusive, spiritual AND a Loop poem to boot. You have far too much time on your hands. Hehe.
Great effort though. I see you have mostly used the loop tactic of making each line almost a stand-alone sentence in itself, thus ensuring that the read is smoother. Good move and a fine effort.
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Congrats for taking on the whole shebang - Acrostic, word-limited, word-inclusive, spiritual AND a Loop poem to boot. You have far too much time on your hands. Hehe.
Great effort though. I see you have mostly used the loop tactic of making each line almost a stand-alone sentence in itself, thus ensuring that the read is smoother. Good move and a fine effort.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you, my friend, actually whipped this up pretty quick, just to have a challenge, as I like loops and acrostics thought I would combine them in this very strange form of rules****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic loop poem, OF GOD'S DISCIPLE, follows the vertical theme and complies with the loop format as the faith and spirituality of the follower becomes the beacon which draws all men to it.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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This acrostic loop poem, OF GOD'S DISCIPLE, follows the vertical theme and complies with the loop format as the faith and spirituality of the follower becomes the beacon which draws all men to it.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Kelly Hanna
You did an excellent job with such hard rules. I enjoyed the subject very much. You chose a great piece for a contest in God's Appreciation. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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You did an excellent job with such hard rules. I enjoyed the subject very much. You chose a great piece for a contest in God's Appreciation. Well done!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Air Spirit
I enjoyed your poem... It was moving, inspirational and had a spiritual truth and purity to its message... However, I believe you misspelled the word disciple -- it is not spelled desciple.. so that unfortunately started off the poem on a rocky note -- other than that, your form was perfect, the message was moving, and it contained a spiritual guideline to follow for true believers.. I typically would have rated it 'good' because of the misspelling, but your message was so great, I went ahead with the Excellent rating...
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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I enjoyed your poem... It was moving, inspirational and had a spiritual truth and purity to its message... However, I believe you misspelled the word disciple -- it is not spelled desciple.. so that unfortunately started off the poem on a rocky note -- other than that, your form was perfect, the message was moving, and it contained a spiritual guideline to follow for true believers.. I typically would have rated it 'good' because of the misspelling, but your message was so great, I went ahead with the Excellent rating...
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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OOOPPPPSSSS!!! how very nice of you to point this out, I am still laughing at such a silly mistake and the fact no one else had picked it up, my many thanks also for your great review without penalty****kahpot
