Of God's Disciple
An Acrostic29 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem about God is very inspirational.
You have the right word count and it is an acrostic.
In the title you have an apostrophe after the word "Gods," should it not be before the "s" in the word?
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Your poem about God is very inspirational.
You have the right word count and it is an acrostic.
In the title you have an apostrophe after the word "Gods," should it not be before the "s" in the word?
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Wow! thank you very much and yes (I have corrected) many thanks, I had a bit of trouble with the title as when I first posted, it read " Desciple" many thanks again****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
This is an excellent faith based poem and I admire how well you did with the acrostic form. "Spirit to endure, to maintain a future that will continue" is a great line, it shows hope arising from faith. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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This is an excellent faith based poem and I admire how well you did with the acrostic form. "Spirit to endure, to maintain a future that will continue" is a great line, it shows hope arising from faith. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from frogbook
Well done with use of the words provided seamlessly integrated. A lovely piece with a lovely presentation also. Best of luck in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Well done with use of the words provided seamlessly integrated. A lovely piece with a lovely presentation also. Best of luck in the voting booth.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I have to say you met the challenge and did it well. It is tricky to write an acrostic and a loop poem in one. I was really taken with how beautifully it flowed, and the words are so very spiritual, I don't think this could be bettered. Superb, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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I have to say you met the challenge and did it well. It is tricky to write an acrostic and a loop poem in one. I was really taken with how beautifully it flowed, and the words are so very spiritual, I don't think this could be bettered. Superb, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
A quick go?! This seems it would have taken hours. It would me anyway. You did a really great job not only doing a loop poem but an acrostic as well. And a great message too. My tiny brain would have been worn out. Really well done and hope you win! Rox
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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A quick go?! This seems it would have taken hours. It would me anyway. You did a really great job not only doing a loop poem but an acrostic as well. And a great message too. My tiny brain would have been worn out. Really well done and hope you win! Rox
Comment Written 27-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for this wonderful and very encouraging review, sometimes hours seen pretty quick when writing****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Of God's Discipline", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I only have fives left. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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"Of God's Discipline", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I only have fives left. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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kahpot**** as always, you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from l.raven
HI Kahpot, so good to see you my sweet friend...
this is a wonderful poem of faith...I love the wording....
and yes God gave us His son to forgive us of our sins...there is no better gift given...I love your poem you...and love this stunning picture...Good Luck...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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HI Kahpot, so good to see you my sweet friend...
this is a wonderful poem of faith...I love the wording....
and yes God gave us His son to forgive us of our sins...there is no better gift given...I love your poem you...and love this stunning picture...Good Luck...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much and yes very nice to see you again****kahpot
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you are soooo welcome my friend...love xxoo
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO KAHPOT: I remember you. Hi there, my friend. I like your work here. It reminds me of a passage that I've read in our Holy Bible that reads like this: "All Scripture is given by inspiration of God, and is profitable for doctrine, for reproof, for correction, for instruction in righteousness." Second TIMOTHY chapter 3 : and verse 16. God's Disciples were His Scribes. I honor each and every one of them. Thank you for sharing this. God bless you, Kahpot. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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HELLO KAHPOT: I remember you. Hi there, my friend. I like your work here. It reminds me of a passage that I've read in our Holy Bible that reads like this: "All Scripture is given by inspiration of God, and is profitable for doctrine, for reproof, for correction, for instruction in righteousness." Second TIMOTHY chapter 3 : and verse 16. God's Disciples were His Scribes. I honor each and every one of them. Thank you for sharing this. God bless you, Kahpot. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
Well done. An acrostic poem of faith can be static if not written with room to manoeuvre. You elaborated well using choice nouns and adjectives which heped the read in being more of a narrative rather than report style.
Good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Well done. An acrostic poem of faith can be static if not written with room to manoeuvre. You elaborated well using choice nouns and adjectives which heped the read in being more of a narrative rather than report style.
Good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, I had fun having a go****kahpot
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Perfect loop acrostic. You included everything in context and kept the piece flowing as if telling a story. Simple and yet complex at the same time. Very well done
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Perfect loop acrostic. You included everything in context and kept the piece flowing as if telling a story. Simple and yet complex at the same time. Very well done
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot
