Online Match
A couple meets online24 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Well Pam I really enjoyed reading this poem. Although long but very insightful and interesting wording for the reader. Each lined lured me into what would happen next and although you didn't say for sure if Dawn escaped or not. I love this piece, very intriguing for reading. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Well Pam I really enjoyed reading this poem. Although long but very insightful and interesting wording for the reader. Each lined lured me into what would happen next and although you didn't say for sure if Dawn escaped or not. I love this piece, very intriguing for reading. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you Mary for all of the dazzling stars. Makes me happy. Thanks for the great review
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Great poem
Comment from LIJ Red
And then she smote him on the head
and left old fishboy lying dead...
I've never chatted with any gals online but those of FS, The internet is a kind of mask that changes the aspect of monstrous malefactors...
excellent story poem.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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And then she smote him on the head
and left old fishboy lying dead...
I've never chatted with any gals online but those of FS, The internet is a kind of mask that changes the aspect of monstrous malefactors...
excellent story poem.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you Red for a fun poem and a nice review
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my land, Pam this is a gripping poem, and most frightening. Your metre and rhyme perfect to relay a note of danger to take care about online dating and phony profiles.
Very nicely done and not too long at all.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Oh my land, Pam this is a gripping poem, and most frightening. Your metre and rhyme perfect to relay a note of danger to take care about online dating and phony profiles.
Very nicely done and not too long at all.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you Gloria for the awesome review
Comment from bob cullen
A crime thriller poem, WOW. Loved the balance and the rhyme though the last line didn't quite work.
I wouldn't worry about the length, it demanded my full attention right though. It was clever and original and for that it deserved the five stars
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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A crime thriller poem, WOW. Loved the balance and the rhyme though the last line didn't quite work.
I wouldn't worry about the length, it demanded my full attention right though. It was clever and original and for that it deserved the five stars
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hi Bob. Thank you for your great review
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this was indeed an epic write, outstanding in narration and its suspenseful telling, a clear message in flawless rhyming rhythm - bold and exciting, an "Exceptional" reminder of always present danger, especially online...
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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In my opinion, this was indeed an epic write, outstanding in narration and its suspenseful telling, a clear message in flawless rhyming rhythm - bold and exciting, an "Exceptional" reminder of always present danger, especially online...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Wow. Thank you so much evesayshi for all of the dazzling stars and for your awesome review. Take care
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You are very welcome, Pam - this is a stunning write in its cautionary message...Eve
Comment from Lady Jane
Wow, this didn't feel like a poem at all, Pam. I was enthralled and sadly, hoping she'd gotten away :( This happens far too often for my liking and your poem here brings the travesty to life - makes it real! The words, the cadence, the strong emotion/conviction, the presentation all flow and are a cohesive blend of life, sadness, and writing. I cannot say I enjoyed reading this, but I do enjoy doling out a 6 for your well crafted, superbly rhymed, extremely timely piece of poetic mastery.
Thanks for sharing.
Janelle
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Wow, this didn't feel like a poem at all, Pam. I was enthralled and sadly, hoping she'd gotten away :( This happens far too often for my liking and your poem here brings the travesty to life - makes it real! The words, the cadence, the strong emotion/conviction, the presentation all flow and are a cohesive blend of life, sadness, and writing. I cannot say I enjoyed reading this, but I do enjoy doling out a 6 for your well crafted, superbly rhymed, extremely timely piece of poetic mastery.
Thanks for sharing.
Janelle
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Wow. Thank you so much Janelle for all of the dazzling stars and for your lovely review
Comment from l.raven
HI Pam, WOW!!!!...what a story told my sweet friend...but you are right...online dating can be very dangerous...I have heard so horror stories...your story is very well told...and not to long...if it saves only one person life....it would be wonderful...sooooo very well written sweet girl...and the picture...perfect...love you...xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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HI Pam, WOW!!!!...what a story told my sweet friend...but you are right...online dating can be very dangerous...I have heard so horror stories...your story is very well told...and not to long...if it saves only one person life....it would be wonderful...sooooo very well written sweet girl...and the picture...perfect...love you...xxoo
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you so very much Linda for the extra star. I really appreciate it. And also for your awesome review
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you are so sweet Pam...thank you...and your are so welcome...love you...xxoo
Comment from Air Spirit
A very realistic and yet very scary poem... You bring into light how 'risky' online dating is..and IF that avenue of dating is pursued is perferred, one must be EXTREMELY careful, cautious and meet them in public places.. your poem was suspenseful and we'll developed.. your story line was really thought out well, and it held my interest the entire poem.. plus, it has really captured the importa ce of 'beubg aware' not only of your circumstances and surroundings, but to keep informed..
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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A very realistic and yet very scary poem... You bring into light how 'risky' online dating is..and IF that avenue of dating is pursued is perferred, one must be EXTREMELY careful, cautious and meet them in public places.. your poem was suspenseful and we'll developed.. your story line was really thought out well, and it held my interest the entire poem.. plus, it has really captured the importa ce of 'beubg aware' not only of your circumstances and surroundings, but to keep informed..
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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If only she had read the entire news article including his photo before she met him. Thank you Cynthia for your awesome review
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Pam. A good story of the dangers of on-line dating. We never know the person we are dealing with. A challenge in this day of not meeting through friends or face-to-face. Your poem is well rhymed and tells an entire story. Happens all too often. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Hi Pam. A good story of the dangers of on-line dating. We never know the person we are dealing with. A challenge in this day of not meeting through friends or face-to-face. Your poem is well rhymed and tells an entire story. Happens all too often. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thank you Marilyn for your very lovely review. I hope you are well tonight
Comment from lyenochka
Oh what a scary ending. I hoped she would have gotten free. But your poem was meant to be a warning so it makes sense to end it there. Great rhyming and meter throughout and very important message!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Oh what a scary ending. I hoped she would have gotten free. But your poem was meant to be a warning so it makes sense to end it there. Great rhyming and meter throughout and very important message!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
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Thank you lyenochka for your very lovely review
