FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Bumpkin's Pumpkin.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from Sugarray77
You have written an adorable poem. I like your bumpkin/pumpkin theme and think you handled it well within your rhyming framework. I would add that in the line.... I'll dared to give it a try.... should that be 'dare'? Just thinking about this.
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You have written an adorable poem. I like your bumpkin/pumpkin theme and think you handled it well within your rhyming framework. I would add that in the line.... I'll dared to give it a try.... should that be 'dare'? Just thinking about this.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
Very nice writing and rhyming in the style of Dr. Suess . I enjoyed the story/poem.Very cool graphic you picked to accompany the story/poem. Nice job. Good luck in the contest!.
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Very nice writing and rhyming in the style of Dr. Suess . I enjoyed the story/poem.Very cool graphic you picked to accompany the story/poem. Nice job. Good luck in the contest!.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
