God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from dragonpoet
Well written poem about faith and how it should not be used as a coat of pride. It should be quiet and person as Jesus always told those he cured not to tell anyone.
Good luck and keep writing.
dp
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Well written poem about faith and how it should not be used as a coat of pride. It should be quiet and person as Jesus always told those he cured not to tell anyone.
Good luck and keep writing.
dp
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from RGstar
Food for thought here. Intrcate and detailed, which asks a few questions concerning belief and the question of it.
Strong write.
My very best wishes.
RGstar
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Food for thought here. Intrcate and detailed, which asks a few questions concerning belief and the question of it.
Strong write.
My very best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
Anytime God makes an appearance in our lives He leaves an indelible impression behind.
He often enters in without fanfare or hoopla, often sneaking in and back out again before we ever even knew He was there.
But, we know.
We know...
~Dean
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Anytime God makes an appearance in our lives He leaves an indelible impression behind.
He often enters in without fanfare or hoopla, often sneaking in and back out again before we ever even knew He was there.
But, we know.
We know...
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
I had more of a job to fathom the meaning of the prompt than I did to get the meaning of the poem. First off, the word count is exactly 123 so that part is achieved. The poem is an acrostic, at first I thought the acrostic had to spell the given words but rejected that when I realised that their letters totalled more than the 14 allowed for the lines. That could only mean they had to appear in the poem. Sensibly, you got that covered in the first line.
If the 14 line requirement suggested a sonnet of some description you did not go down that route, and I cant say I blame you for taking the easier option of a free verse. It works very well and I wish you luck in the contest. it seems to be attracting considerable interest.
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I had more of a job to fathom the meaning of the prompt than I did to get the meaning of the poem. First off, the word count is exactly 123 so that part is achieved. The poem is an acrostic, at first I thought the acrostic had to spell the given words but rejected that when I realised that their letters totalled more than the 14 allowed for the lines. That could only mean they had to appear in the poem. Sensibly, you got that covered in the first line.
If the 14 line requirement suggested a sonnet of some description you did not go down that route, and I cant say I blame you for taking the easier option of a free verse. It works very well and I wish you luck in the contest. it seems to be attracting considerable interest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Artasylum
Hey ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
Very nice message it inspires the reader to know that God is asking to be God in your mind, body, soul. Without ceremony or pomp and definitely not circumstance. yours, diana
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Hey ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
Very nice message it inspires the reader to know that God is asking to be God in your mind, body, soul. Without ceremony or pomp and definitely not circumstance. yours, diana
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from krys123
Cheers, AlCreator Litt Dear;
>Before I can even determine whether or not a person does not achieve an excellent review I have to ask myself what exactly does this writer trying to say?
> What is the exact definitions of his conceptual theme?
>Why are you keep talking about an experience with the Lord so secretively.
>This throws me off the center of your explanation and I wish you would try to explain exactly what you are writing and then I read your authors notes and explains it better than your poem.
> This is unusual.
> Please explain what exactly you meant in your poem so I can determine that it isn't me this going crazy.
> Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one and especially good luck in the contest.
Alx
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Cheers, AlCreator Litt Dear;
>Before I can even determine whether or not a person does not achieve an excellent review I have to ask myself what exactly does this writer trying to say?
> What is the exact definitions of his conceptual theme?
>Why are you keep talking about an experience with the Lord so secretively.
>This throws me off the center of your explanation and I wish you would try to explain exactly what you are writing and then I read your authors notes and explains it better than your poem.
> This is unusual.
> Please explain what exactly you meant in your poem so I can determine that it isn't me this going crazy.
> Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one and especially good luck in the contest.
Alx
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
intercession with God healS the ills of past and present and strengthens people to respond with confidence to future challenges. Those who read this may gain a sense of spiritual integrity rekindling hope in their lives, and encouraging them to renew the spirit in their hearts. So well done. Kindest regards Meia :)
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intercession with God healS the ills of past and present and strengthens people to respond with confidence to future challenges. Those who read this may gain a sense of spiritual integrity rekindling hope in their lives, and encouraging them to renew the spirit in their hearts. So well done. Kindest regards Meia :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from MissMerri
A most credible account of a meeting with God! This poem speaks volumes about God's creative abilities (limitless) and His way of speaking to each of us according to our needs and propensities. His directions seems clear and you've related them perfectly and poetically. I enjoyed your poem very much and imagine it will do well in this contest. Best wishes. MM
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A most credible account of a meeting with God! This poem speaks volumes about God's creative abilities (limitless) and His way of speaking to each of us according to our needs and propensities. His directions seems clear and you've related them perfectly and poetically. I enjoyed your poem very much and imagine it will do well in this contest. Best wishes. MM
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from pome lover
very good, Dr Alcreater Litt Dear - but you say God said not to tell anyone about His visit to you. Is that not what your poem is about? His visit and what he told you?
I am sure you abided by all His instructions to you, however, in the writing of this lovely poem.
pome lover
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very good, Dr Alcreater Litt Dear - but you say God said not to tell anyone about His visit to you. Is that not what your poem is about? His visit and what he told you?
I am sure you abided by all His instructions to you, however, in the writing of this lovely poem.
pome lover
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever acrostic and faith to me is a very private thing and I would never try to encourage others into it, we all choose our own path, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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A clever acrostic and faith to me is a very private thing and I would never try to encourage others into it, we all choose our own path, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
