God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from Mastery
Thankyou, ALD. (Sorry, I don't know your proper name, my friend. I do enjoy your poetry however, like this staanza:
"And do not act anyway to make it a religious issue
Never explain it spiritual or miracle
Do nothing to raise a dubious question in mind"
Wonderfully brilliant. Bless you. Bob
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Thankyou, ALD. (Sorry, I don't know your proper name, my friend. I do enjoy your poetry however, like this staanza:
"And do not act anyway to make it a religious issue
Never explain it spiritual or miracle
Do nothing to raise a dubious question in mind"
Wonderfully brilliant. Bless you. Bob
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Relation to God is a great thing to be discovered in oneself. If you do keep it as strong as you can and keep closer. The more pain he gives , the greater the love and the need to remain closer to him.
God bless.
Danny Jock
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Relation to God is a great thing to be discovered in oneself. If you do keep it as strong as you can and keep closer. The more pain he gives , the greater the love and the need to remain closer to him.
God bless.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
Comment from Liberty Justice
Six stars! Are you serious? Do you really think you had a visit from GOD? How utterly awesome and such a spiritual revelation and wonderful event as testified in your verses. May God BLESS me and my family to be healthy and wealthy; you and your family; and may GOD Bless America. WELL DONE! Liberty justice
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Six stars! Are you serious? Do you really think you had a visit from GOD? How utterly awesome and such a spiritual revelation and wonderful event as testified in your verses. May God BLESS me and my family to be healthy and wealthy; you and your family; and may GOD Bless America. WELL DONE! Liberty justice
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
Comment from fivecardstud1247
I like this very much. this is one gets a person start thinking maybe there is something out there even when they can see it. I see it all the time in the picture I use there has be somthing greater than any of us, Yes sometimes i forget when i get mad about how people treat others i for get i am not the judge God and Jesus is. If I remmeber that i would not be gtting mad over hafe stuff i do. LOL GB
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I like this very much. this is one gets a person start thinking maybe there is something out there even when they can see it. I see it all the time in the picture I use there has be somthing greater than any of us, Yes sometimes i forget when i get mad about how people treat others i for get i am not the judge God and Jesus is. If I remmeber that i would not be gtting mad over hafe stuff i do. LOL GB
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
Comment from kathleenspalding
Excellent message, flow and storytelling in this skillfully done Acrostic Poem. Very well written. Only one question - And do not act anyway to - did you mean any way instead of anyway?
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Excellent message, flow and storytelling in this skillfully done Acrostic Poem. Very well written. Only one question - And do not act anyway to - did you mean any way instead of anyway?
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO ALCREATOR: I agree with you. We should all enter God's gates with thanksgiving...and enter His courts with praise. God said that we should do this. So I agree that this is what we should all do, Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO ALCREATOR: I agree with you. We should all enter God's gates with thanksgiving...and enter His courts with praise. God said that we should do this. So I agree that this is what we should all do, Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from karenina
What impacted me about his is that each and every experience of every soul with God is unique and meant, I believe, solely for that individual. To proclaim it, explain it, try to prove it only diminishes the blessings that is ours and ours alone.
Nice.
Karenina
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What impacted me about his is that each and every experience of every soul with God is unique and meant, I believe, solely for that individual. To proclaim it, explain it, try to prove it only diminishes the blessings that is ours and ours alone.
Nice.
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
Very good, and you have the words that were required spelled out; to me you and Jesus
realized that publicity over His miracles might hinder and would divert public attention from His purpose of why He was send by God to save us from sin.
I believe I see your reason when I read this ---
God came and left me with no proof
Only I write that I understood Him as He told me
Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone
Gert
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
Very good, and you have the words that were required spelled out; to me you and Jesus
realized that publicity over His miracles might hinder and would divert public attention from His purpose of why He was send by God to save us from sin.
I believe I see your reason when I read this ---
God came and left me with no proof
Only I write that I understood Him as He told me
Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone
Gert
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from Cheryl1957
I really like this poem, and the way it flowed. I also enjoyed the message. It seems that we spend so much time trying to prove God to others, we interfere at times with his plan and the way he chooses to reveal himself to others. Great poem. Thanks for sharing!
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I really like this poem, and the way it flowed. I also enjoyed the message. It seems that we spend so much time trying to prove God to others, we interfere at times with his plan and the way he chooses to reveal himself to others. Great poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Excellent. Check spelling on publicize. It may be correct your way and mine. If I had time, I would check for your, but am at work! Sorry. This is a fantastic job with this Acrostic with the parameters set by the contest. Good Luck and great job!
Wendy
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Excellent. Check spelling on publicize. It may be correct your way and mine. If I had time, I would check for your, but am at work! Sorry. This is a fantastic job with this Acrostic with the parameters set by the contest. Good Luck and great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2018
