God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from ronnie k
The power and belief in your lines speak of our Father who looks for no credit but is due praise and worship, I found a earness write that wants only too share the joy of knowing He is.
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The power and belief in your lines speak of our Father who looks for no credit but is due praise and worship, I found a earness write that wants only too share the joy of knowing He is.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from robyn corum
Al,
It is almost useless to argue with folks who don't believe in God. Those of us who do believe KNOW He exists and I find it sad that not everyone can see that. This was another interesting read. Thank you!
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Al,
It is almost useless to argue with folks who don't believe in God. Those of us who do believe KNOW He exists and I find it sad that not everyone can see that. This was another interesting read. Thank you!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from Michele Harber
I respect the idea you present that God makes His presence known, but not for His own fame or recognition, nor that of whomever He appears to. Accept that you saw and understood, but don't use it for your own advancement in society, as that's not what He intended it for. There are times when the poem didn't read quite as smoothly as I might have liked - BUT, considering the stringent rules imposed, I think you did an excellent job. You met the required word and line count, and even managed to do it as an acrostic. Well done.
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I respect the idea you present that God makes His presence known, but not for His own fame or recognition, nor that of whomever He appears to. Accept that you saw and understood, but don't use it for your own advancement in society, as that's not what He intended it for. There are times when the poem didn't read quite as smoothly as I might have liked - BUT, considering the stringent rules imposed, I think you did an excellent job. You met the required word and line count, and even managed to do it as an acrostic. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Insider98
A very nice message. We shouldn't flaunt our faith and feel superior. Faith is personal, private. We don't need approval of others to believe. Strong contender!
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A very nice message. We shouldn't flaunt our faith and feel superior. Faith is personal, private. We don't need approval of others to believe. Strong contender!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Mark D. R.
I greatly enjoy the images you select to accompany your verse. Often, that is the reason I open up your postings.
To be honest, I am not so spiritual as you and have difficulty in truly evaluating longer verse than my 5-7-5 efforts. Maybe I will someday develop a higher level that I can create verse similar to yours. As a newbie in my Haiku poetry style, I am still trying to find a comfortable niche.
So keep posting your inspiring and often provocative images to enable me to consider rating future poems by you (-:
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I greatly enjoy the images you select to accompany your verse. Often, that is the reason I open up your postings.
To be honest, I am not so spiritual as you and have difficulty in truly evaluating longer verse than my 5-7-5 efforts. Maybe I will someday develop a higher level that I can create verse similar to yours. As a newbie in my Haiku poetry style, I am still trying to find a comfortable niche.
So keep posting your inspiring and often provocative images to enable me to consider rating future poems by you (-:
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of poetry dear alcreator! I also think that you have conveyed well your message across the whole poem. I did wholeheartedly appreciated this writing as it hits a nerve.
thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
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this is a fine piece of poetry dear alcreator! I also think that you have conveyed well your message across the whole poem. I did wholeheartedly appreciated this writing as it hits a nerve.
thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Well written. You got all four of your words out of the way with the first line. That gave you the rest of it for your own thoughts. I agree. Time with God is personal. It matters not if you are in a church or arena that seats thousands, your meeting with God is personal. I like the thoughts. I like the way your express them. Good job.
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Well written. You got all four of your words out of the way with the first line. That gave you the rest of it for your own thoughts. I agree. Time with God is personal. It matters not if you are in a church or arena that seats thousands, your meeting with God is personal. I like the thoughts. I like the way your express them. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from Zue65
Yes, I agree God need no confirmation or approval from His creations. But He needs us to praise and pay glory for what He's done for mankind. God loves to communicate with us through prayers and He's happy if we seek Him everyday.
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Yes, I agree God need no confirmation or approval from His creations. But He needs us to praise and pay glory for what He's done for mankind. God loves to communicate with us through prayers and He's happy if we seek Him everyday.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a deeply philosophical and personal write you have crafted. You made a strong point that we do not need man's justification. Well done on crafting this verse.
All the best,
Melissa
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This is a deeply philosophical and personal write you have crafted. You made a strong point that we do not need man's justification. Well done on crafting this verse.
All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Anntonette
The acrostic form is a little confusing to read, I suggest resizing the words to small so it fits within the box making the acrostic show. Overall great use of strong words and very descriptive as well.
Good luck!
- Anntonette J
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The acrostic form is a little confusing to read, I suggest resizing the words to small so it fits within the box making the acrostic show. Overall great use of strong words and very descriptive as well.
Good luck!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
