God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Alcreator,
This poem inspired me and is a well-written and meaningful poem. I enjoyed its content, flow and pace.
Thank you for sharing its beauty with us.
Deborah
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Dear Alcreator,
This poem inspired me and is a well-written and meaningful poem. I enjoyed its content, flow and pace.
Thank you for sharing its beauty with us.
Deborah
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I enjoyed your freestyle structure. Complimentary artwork with a thankful prayer. I agree, God needs no affirmation from man. Excellent work.
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I enjoyed your freestyle structure. Complimentary artwork with a thankful prayer. I agree, God needs no affirmation from man. Excellent work.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Karen Luciana
Hi Alcreator,
Again, I am reading another wonderful piece of your writing. The last verse is my favorite. I think the word choice there is excellent. The overall message of your poem is beautiful to me.
I am wondering:
Do not publicise- should be publicize
explain it spiritual or miracle- Did you mean "its?"
Have a great day!
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Hi Alcreator,
Again, I am reading another wonderful piece of your writing. The last verse is my favorite. I think the word choice there is excellent. The overall message of your poem is beautiful to me.
I am wondering:
Do not publicise- should be publicize
explain it spiritual or miracle- Did you mean "its?"
Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Ben Colder
A little small still voice inside once told a man it would rain and go tell the people. Of course it was during a drought. I read your poem and glad you have a relationship with Him. Best to you.
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A little small still voice inside once told a man it would rain and go tell the people. Of course it was during a drought. I read your poem and glad you have a relationship with Him. Best to you.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
As always you meet and exceed the challenge!
You do a wonderful job in making your works somewhat mysterious.
I fully believe you have a relationship with God like no other!
Very well done! Again!
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As always you meet and exceed the challenge!
You do a wonderful job in making your works somewhat mysterious.
I fully believe you have a relationship with God like no other!
Very well done! Again!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from JudyE
You write 'He told me
Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone' but you are telling us all! But that's okay. I admire your devotion and you have written a really lovely tribute here. Take care and good luck in the contest.
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You write 'He told me
Do not tell anything about this visit to anyone' but you are telling us all! But that's okay. I admire your devotion and you have written a really lovely tribute here. Take care and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Well written and interesting. 'miracles' every day - unexplained events that must surely prove God's existence. Thought provoking and well expressed poem.
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Well written and interesting. 'miracles' every day - unexplained events that must surely prove God's existence. Thought provoking and well expressed poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
Comment from Cedar
This is a beautiful spiritual poem and is written with perfect rhyming. However, I also enjoyed the words to the prayer in your presentation picture very much...
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This is a beautiful spiritual poem and is written with perfect rhyming. However, I also enjoyed the words to the prayer in your presentation picture very much...
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your contest entry. I liked your 'no frills' poem about not putting god into a box with a label. Everyone has their own idea about He who first loved us. Man seems to need labels, God has none. Blessings, Kay.
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Good luck with your contest entry. I liked your 'no frills' poem about not putting god into a box with a label. Everyone has their own idea about He who first loved us. Man seems to need labels, God has none. Blessings, Kay.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
Comment from Mame
Well written and so true! We certainly do encounter 'miracles' every day - unexplained events that surely endorse God's existence. Why though is it necessary to remain silent? Thought provoking and well expressed!
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Well written and so true! We certainly do encounter 'miracles' every day - unexplained events that surely endorse God's existence. Why though is it necessary to remain silent? Thought provoking and well expressed!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
