God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from LuLu Civel
It is an interesting reflection on an encounter believed by the character in the poem to have been an encounter with God.
The fact that God asks this experience to be kept private and is then recorded in a poem in an internet forum for others to see and read, feels uncomfortable to read, that maybe we aren't meant to know about this, but now we do.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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It is an interesting reflection on an encounter believed by the character in the poem to have been an encounter with God.
The fact that God asks this experience to be kept private and is then recorded in a poem in an internet forum for others to see and read, feels uncomfortable to read, that maybe we aren't meant to know about this, but now we do.
The poem successfully meets the acrostic conditions.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you; your wisdom reveals; thanks to your worldwide wisdom sparks; your wisdom has already been recognised at Fanstory; I do appreciate your power of thoughts and expression; your writing of second review in your life, obviously second number of reviewing is appreciable and it proves your wisdom in reviewing; I welcome you a wise reviewer of Fanstory; wish you every success in your chosen goal; with kind regards. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
Comment from tfawcus
I always find these poems of yours interesting and illuminating. Mankind's interpretation of God is remarkably consistent across religions - a figure that is ineffable, inconceivable, and incomprehensible.
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I always find these poems of yours interesting and illuminating. Mankind's interpretation of God is remarkably consistent across religions - a figure that is ineffable, inconceivable, and incomprehensible.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
Comment from WryWriter
Through prayer each can go to God, but God decides who He will visit and who He will answer. An Acrostic. Let no man take credit for what God does. To God be all glory!!
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Through prayer each can go to God, but God decides who He will visit and who He will answer. An Acrostic. Let no man take credit for what God does. To God be all glory!!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Very good post, to the point and clearly understandable. One
suggestion in second line of second stanza, "publicise" should
be "publicize." No criticism, just a suggestion.
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Very good post, to the point and clearly understandable. One
suggestion in second line of second stanza, "publicise" should
be "publicize." No criticism, just a suggestion.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from The Death
It's all about the faith one has in Him. If someone doesn't believe in His existence, they can't be forced to do so. It's a realization that one my experience sooner or later. Your poem is thought provoking, as always. I enjoyed reading it.
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It's all about the faith one has in Him. If someone doesn't believe in His existence, they can't be forced to do so. It's a realization that one my experience sooner or later. Your poem is thought provoking, as always. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
God is our proclamation , yes, I agree. However, it is wise to spread the wisdom that you read in His word I believe. Not sure if that's where you were headed with this poem. But to realize who God is and what He has done is very good.
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God is our proclamation , yes, I agree. However, it is wise to spread the wisdom that you read in His word I believe. Not sure if that's where you were headed with this poem. But to realize who God is and what He has done is very good.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: God created us to connect with Him.
I hope that you walk and talk and feel His presence.
We don't understand why things happen like the
border issues....yet, we need to be the hands and voice
for The Lord. God bless. flylikeaneagle
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Alcreator: God created us to connect with Him.
I hope that you walk and talk and feel His presence.
We don't understand why things happen like the
border issues....yet, we need to be the hands and voice
for The Lord. God bless. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from l.raven
HI Al, God came and went...but the next time Jesus comes...
there will be no leaving...we will either go with Him...or not...well done my sweet friend...I love the words in your poem...and your picture says it all...very well written...love Linda xxoo
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HI Al, God came and went...but the next time Jesus comes...
there will be no leaving...we will either go with Him...or not...well done my sweet friend...I love the words in your poem...and your picture says it all...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent. It's a great entry in the Poetry in God's Appreciation prompt. I don't agree with the first statement. When someone was asked how can you prove God? He answered the Jew.
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This is excellent. It's a great entry in the Poetry in God's Appreciation prompt. I don't agree with the first statement. When someone was asked how can you prove God? He answered the Jew.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Hitcher
God's making house calls now ; ))Next time He calls send Him my way will you. I have a few questions of my own : )) An interesting possibility you have offered up here friend, a personal visit, one on One but sworn to secrecy.
I am a little confused by your first line;
God came and left me with no proof - I'm guessing proof to show the world He came?
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God's making house calls now ; ))Next time He calls send Him my way will you. I have a few questions of my own : )) An interesting possibility you have offered up here friend, a personal visit, one on One but sworn to secrecy.
I am a little confused by your first line;
God came and left me with no proof - I'm guessing proof to show the world He came?
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
