God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like this poem. It reminds me of my friend's story. He told all his friends that he has seen god. God has asked him to coach people to be positive in their lives.
I like what the poem says to keep it secret. Build up individuals faith and have faith and confidence to deal with daily lives.
thanks for sharing.
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I like this poem. It reminds me of my friend's story. He told all his friends that he has seen god. God has asked him to coach people to be positive in their lives.
I like what the poem says to keep it secret. Build up individuals faith and have faith and confidence to deal with daily lives.
thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Excellent point. Our relationship with God is personal. His presence in our life is not to be used as a tool... it is a blessing intended for our well being. It is not of our concern what others may think, but what we know to be true. Honest and sincerely put. Great job!
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Excellent point. Our relationship with God is personal. His presence in our life is not to be used as a tool... it is a blessing intended for our well being. It is not of our concern what others may think, but what we know to be true. Honest and sincerely put. Great job!
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Zan Zan
Six Stars. (*whispers*anything to do with abba)
Coming right up.
I dont know if I'm right or wrong but I smelled the prophetic atmosphere around this lol
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Six Stars. (*whispers*anything to do with abba)
Coming right up.
I dont know if I'm right or wrong but I smelled the prophetic atmosphere around this lol
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Boogienights
An interesting poem about your close relationship with God. I think there are many people who share this same experience with the creator and I do envy them. God has never spoken to me in my heart or mind. Thank you for sharing.
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An interesting poem about your close relationship with God. I think there are many people who share this same experience with the creator and I do envy them. God has never spoken to me in my heart or mind. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
I think this must be written on fiction for Jesus has come to die on the cross and He is coming back soon. He wants us to let everyone know so they can b e ready for Him. Nice poem. Keep up the good work.
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I think this must be written on fiction for Jesus has come to die on the cross and He is coming back soon. He wants us to let everyone know so they can b e ready for Him. Nice poem. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Gregory Lambert
I like your poem very much. And what a challenge, to use four given words and written as an acrostic poem! Great message too, about how God is a personal experience that doesn't always have to be shared with others. And the four rhymes in the last stanza are a nice touch too.
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I like your poem very much. And what a challenge, to use four given words and written as an acrostic poem! Great message too, about how God is a personal experience that doesn't always have to be shared with others. And the four rhymes in the last stanza are a nice touch too.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from equestrik
This write is interesting and your picture choice is well done as well. I appreciate your statements of your own convictions of truth and I wish you all the best.
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This write is interesting and your picture choice is well done as well. I appreciate your statements of your own convictions of truth and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Paul McFarland
I liked the brief prayer on the picture the best. The acrostic was well done, though I scratched my head a minute or two over some of the lines. I appreciate spiritual poems and have written a few myself, so I applaud the poets attempt.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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I liked the brief prayer on the picture the best. The acrostic was well done, though I scratched my head a minute or two over some of the lines. I appreciate spiritual poems and have written a few myself, so I applaud the poets attempt.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thank you for writing this review speaks and reveals your wisdom.
I do appreciate your fourth number (No. 4) of writing this review after joining this site.
I welcome you a wise reviewer, a newbie, maybe a one day old member of this site.
I am happy to note that my poor writing (this is not self-pleading anyway, and to prove or call you the greatest or best or most successful reviewer, for you have just begun your journey to the world of writing review, I have written about 105,000, about One Lakh Five Thousand or more, for I like writing positive reviews as you love or like writing spiritual poems, you have mentioned in the review.
One day, I also started writing review number one (Review No. 1), now the number of writing reviews is going toward one million; I know and believe the moment I write anything about self-achievement in pride, next moment I feel sorry and poor for writing anything in self-pride, so there is nothing to feel proud of; as you have shared your emotion, so I have done this.
Anyway, I am happy and at the same time, I write I am sorry to note some of the lines of my poem scratched your wisdom, thank you for writing honest word or feeling.
Through your review God has again taught me a lesson on my writing and self-pride.
Yes, I know and do believe; only God is perfect, wisest for He is Omniscient.
Thank you for your appreciation of my attempt.
With kind regards, ALCREATOR 23/05/2021
Comment from Ricky1024
I enjoyed this contest entry.
It seems like something out of a Victoria's Secret store.
It was well written with wonderful Theme and imagery.
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It flowed and read well with no grammar issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky1024
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I enjoyed this contest entry.
It seems like something out of a Victoria's Secret store.
It was well written with wonderful Theme and imagery.
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It flowed and read well with no grammar issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 23-May-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very thought-provoking poem about your relationship with the Lord. I do, however, believe in spreading the Good News. By talking about it, it may be the only way that a person may learn the goodness of our Lord.
Patty
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A very thought-provoking poem about your relationship with the Lord. I do, however, believe in spreading the Good News. By talking about it, it may be the only way that a person may learn the goodness of our Lord.
Patty
Comment Written 23-May-2021
